a flower in the snow ( Archived) (12)

Dec 6, 2006 10:33 AM CST a flower in the snow
duce1969
duce1969duce1969fraziers bottom, West Virginia USA84 Threads 610 Posts
as the morning snow shines with the rise of the sun
i see a flower all alone in a field of straw
a vision of beauty so rare
as i step closer it slowly moves away
i feel the cold wind in my face
as i move faster and faster to the flower
till i can see it is you the one and only
true love of my life
then i awake to see it was just a dream
of a love that has pasted me by
not a shimer of life could compair to
the love in my heart
that i have to find my one and only love
that has pasted me by


poem by ducewine
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Dec 6, 2006 10:36 AM CST a flower in the snow
Sadeyes044
Sadeyes044Sadeyes044Tonawanda, New York USA4 Threads 416 Posts
Very nice Duce heartfelt and honest great job! thumbs up
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Dec 6, 2006 10:41 AM CST a flower in the snow
duce1969
duce1969duce1969fraziers bottom, West Virginia USA84 Threads 610 Posts
thank you glad someone reads this stuff that comes out of me
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Dec 6, 2006 10:53 AM CST a flower in the snow
nuala
nualanualadublin, Dublin Ireland12 Threads 6,456 Posts
well done it is lovely and so sad, thanks for sharing your work with us wave hug
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Dec 6, 2006 11:05 AM CST a flower in the snow
geminilove1669
geminilove1669geminilove1669Keenesburg, Colorado USA256 Posts
LOVE this poem very nice. So true. Very nice job! blushing
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Dec 6, 2006 11:36 AM CST a flower in the snow
RedHeadedTaurus
RedHeadedTaurusRedHeadedTaurusHere, Michigan USA17 Threads 1 Polls 8,455 Posts
Awwww....lovely! applause
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Dec 6, 2006 2:15 PM CST a flower in the snow
Butterfly
ButterflyButterflyMobile, Alabama USA3 Threads 852 Posts
Wow, great poem. Makes me a little weepy. hug
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Dec 11, 2006 9:35 PM CST a flower in the snow
ladydancerdivine
ladydancerdivineladydancerdivinejackson, Ohio USA19 Threads 256 Posts
i like your poem... didn't know you wrote poetry... i was an english major part of the time in college, have quite a few of my own. it tells a lot about you
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Dec 11, 2006 9:36 PM CST a flower in the snow
lvslife
lvslifelvslifemoore, USA223 Threads 2,565 Posts
Thank you. It is very sweet duce.wine
Kat
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Dec 11, 2006 9:37 PM CST a flower in the snow
twilightstwin
twilightstwintwilightstwinDetroit Lakes, USA95 Threads 3,537 Posts
wink good work
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Dec 11, 2006 10:38 PM CST a flower in the snow
blancalatina
blancalatinablancalatinawinston-salem, USA42 Threads 3,315 Posts
crying crying crying crying crying
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Dec 11, 2006 10:39 PM CST a flower in the snow
cajunfroggy
cajunfroggycajunfroggyWaco, USA145 Threads 7,332 Posts
beautiful Duce
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