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Nov 5, 2005 4:15 PM CST my eyes
chance2485
chance2485chance2485cabin in the woods, Michigan USA123 Threads 1,365 Posts
MY FIRST POEM BY CHANCE2485

my eyes
when you looked in my eyes
what was there for you to see?
a soul that no one else has touched
the way you have dared to my love
or blue,just looking sad and lonely
till you looked in
maybe love and lust was there
maybe needing someone to hold
did they tell you that I cared?
were there tears? and if so
were they sad or happy?
did you look at them and say?
"here is where I want to stay"
or did they tell you no
that you must stay away?
did you see the fear?
wanting and passion my love
as you stood near
or did you glance andd see a mystery?
or did a women appear?
one who's risk it all
just to see what was
really looking back at me


About first online meeting of a couple
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Nov 5, 2005 4:19 PM CST my eyes
cutelildevilsmom
cutelildevilsmomcutelildevilsmomportsmouth, New Hampshire USA60 Threads 7,772 Posts
very nice
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Nov 5, 2005 4:21 PM CST my eyes
TabooN
TabooNTabooNClaremont, USA47 Threads 12,843 Posts
Chance

Thank you for sharing this. Beautiful!:)
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Nov 5, 2005 4:29 PM CST my eyes
chance2485
chance2485chance2485cabin in the woods, Michigan USA123 Threads 1,365 Posts
thank you both, I did meet someone off the net and wow
it just brought feelings I didnt know was there
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Nov 5, 2005 4:44 PM CST my eyes
TabooN
TabooNTabooNClaremont, USA47 Threads 12,843 Posts
Aww, very cool, you=0D
inspiration, eh?
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Nov 5, 2005 4:52 PM CST my eyes
chance2485
chance2485chance2485cabin in the woods, Michigan USA123 Threads 1,365 Posts
yes and what a gentle man took me dancing slow!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Nov 5, 2005 4:55 PM CST my eyes
TabooN
TabooNTabooNClaremont, USA47 Threads 12,843 Posts
Ooooo, nice!
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Nov 5, 2005 4:58 PM CST my eyes
chance2485
chance2485chance2485cabin in the woods, Michigan USA123 Threads 1,365 Posts
my first date when wonderful he treated me like a lady
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Nov 5, 2005 5:09 PM CST my eyes
TabooN
TabooNTabooNClaremont, USA47 Threads 12,843 Posts
As it should be, hon. So, when is the next one?=0) nosey, heh
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Nov 5, 2005 5:14 PM CST my eyes
chance2485
chance2485chance2485cabin in the woods, Michigan USA123 Threads 1,365 Posts
he live two hours from me.So he's next day off tuesday
he e-mail all day long he works on computers,I have been
smiling for two days now thanks,taboon
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Nov 5, 2005 5:46 PM CST my eyes
TabooN
TabooNTabooNClaremont, USA47 Threads 12,843 Posts
:)

like to hear about success...Way to go., you!
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Nov 5, 2005 5:59 PM CST my eyes
chance2485
chance2485chance2485cabin in the woods, Michigan USA123 Threads 1,365 Posts
thank you,it was just first date in three years,and he
is one of a kind, most importantly . he didn't lie
in his profile.in fact he left alot out.I was so scared and
after meeting it like we know each other all our lives.and it
was refreshing to have car door opened for me.he made me feel
important .I felt 16 again and smiled and laughed it was a very nice date, even if we dont see each other,it gave me
hope.
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Nov 5, 2005 6:25 PM CST my eyes
TabooN
TabooNTabooNClaremont, USA47 Threads 12,843 Posts
aww, thank you for sharing this...wonderful to read:)
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Nov 5, 2005 7:22 PM CST my eyes
RainbowSlider
RainbowSliderRainbowSliderYellville, USA171 Threads 7,174 Posts
Beautiful poem, Sharon. Thank you for sharing. :)
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Nov 5, 2005 7:32 PM CST my eyes
chance2485
chance2485chance2485cabin in the woods, Michigan USA123 Threads 1,365 Posts
THANK YOU ROY THAT MEANS ALOT COMING FROM YOU MY FRIEND
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Nov 5, 2005 8:28 PM CST my eyes
RainbowSlider
RainbowSliderRainbowSliderYellville, USA171 Threads 7,174 Posts
Your welcome, Sharon. I know your friendship has meant a lot to me. I really appreciated the feeling of acceptance.
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Nov 5, 2005 10:27 PM CST my eyes
yellow_rose64
yellow_rose64yellow_rose64Stickville, Indiana USA29 Threads 1,123 Posts
Nice poem, chance2485. Thank you for sharing with us.
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