My last day ( Archived) (16)

Mar 28, 2007 1:27 AM CST My last day
FrequentlyFallen
FrequentlyFallenFrequentlyFallenCoventry, West Midlands, England UK8 Threads 35 Posts
As the sun gently begins to rise, i turn and gaze into your eyes, the beauty of your soul washing my whole being in silent wonder.
Holding my breath just a little trying to keep this moment, you softly hold me with your words as you tell me you love me.
My voice shrinks, stolen by the impact of your words.
I hold even tighter to your hand as i struggle to tell you so much in so few words, to speak my mind,body and souls thoughts becomes almost too much to contain.
I never do manage to get the words to form in my mouth and i pull away, i run from you inside my own mind.

This stuff may sound a bit weird at first but there is a valid reason as to why ive posted it.
These are the feelings i have about the commitment of using the word love (well a few breif ideas at least), my personal veiw is that love is an grossly over used phrase. It's meant to be the most powerful thing that humans can feel, so what im asking is what do you guys think in all honesty. Am i just nuts or is love not love anymore?

confused
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Mar 28, 2007 1:32 AM CST My last day
dixrog
dixrogdixrogNorton, Virginia USA54 Threads 1,974 Posts
Nope,
You're right it is over used and tossed around. People think it's as easy to end a marriage as it is to end a pregnancy. Things just aren't right. But against the odds, when love does prevail, that is where heaven is!

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Mar 28, 2007 1:33 AM CST My last day
iRon12345
iRon12345iRon12345Tempe, USA35 Threads 2,473 Posts
Love has away if making things seem weired and if you are in love chances are you are nutshandshake
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Mar 28, 2007 1:59 AM CST My last day
FrequentlyFallen
FrequentlyFallenFrequentlyFallenCoventry, West Midlands, England UK8 Threads 35 Posts
You may have a point, its just a shame that people have lost their faith in the word too, well i know i have. Thanx for posting a reply to the Q. grin
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Mar 28, 2007 2:01 AM CST My last day
FrequentlyFallen
FrequentlyFallenFrequentlyFallenCoventry, West Midlands, England UK8 Threads 35 Posts
It can do , but its not like a cold you cant just wake up and go, "on no ive got the love my heads not straight". I think people mistake enfatuation and love far to readily. Thanx for posting a reply to the Q. grin
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Mar 28, 2007 2:04 AM CST My last day
Ubuntu
UbuntuUbuntuPerryville, Arkansas USA2 Threads 88 Posts
Y'all worry too much about what others do, imho.
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Mar 28, 2007 2:06 AM CST My last day
FrequentlyFallen
FrequentlyFallenFrequentlyFallenCoventry, West Midlands, England UK8 Threads 35 Posts
Unfortunatly though what others do all to often affect what you or i do too, so it makes sense to gage the response of others to a question like that. Especially as evedently at some point if i wanna love or br loved i have to involve others. grin
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Mar 28, 2007 2:16 AM CST My last day
Ubuntu
UbuntuUbuntuPerryville, Arkansas USA2 Threads 88 Posts
Everybody has a different opinion on a subject like 'love'. It's useless trying to mold your actions around a subject as broad as 'love'. It's easier to just let what happens happen. Trying to hard for love is just as bad as not trying at all. Excuse me while I head-bang to this song.
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Mar 28, 2007 2:25 AM CST My last day
Ubuntu
UbuntuUbuntuPerryville, Arkansas USA2 Threads 88 Posts
My existence on CS is a story for another day. :P I've been around for a long time. I'm not sure why I started posting again. I'm not looking for a girl, either. I'm only after one girl now adays. I do enjoy the forums here, though. I's like a virtual soap opera.
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Mar 28, 2007 3:18 AM CST My last day
TomTam
TomTamTomTamMelbourne, Australia45 Threads 577 Posts
you're right in what you say, love is not love anymore. Sometimes I think the technology has taken us to such lifestyle we're all living, like running on the fast track, and dropping all beautiful meaning of life - including care and love, people have no time and no patience to love, and if this love happens, mostly not the love you speak about, it then breaks after months or years.
why you name this thread "My last day"
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Mar 28, 2007 3:24 AM CST My last day
FrequentlyFallen
FrequentlyFallenFrequentlyFallenCoventry, West Midlands, England UK8 Threads 35 Posts
It was reflective of the initial story about the last day in the relationship because of the quickness it was moving, maybe a bit too displaced from what i was trying to get at,so it probably looks like it makes no sense, cheers
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Mar 28, 2007 4:03 AM CST My last day
sweetcherry
sweetcherrysweetcherrysouth, Xlokk Malta21 Threads 1 Polls 376 Posts
I don't think that anyone nutsy could post such a beautiful piece of writing blushing
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Mar 28, 2007 4:12 AM CST My last day
FrequentlyFallen
FrequentlyFallenFrequentlyFallenCoventry, West Midlands, England UK8 Threads 35 Posts
Thankyou, maybe not nuts, but definatly in a minority as to how i think about stuff i beleive. grin
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Mar 29, 2007 2:29 AM CST My last day
buffy41583
buffy41583buffy41583Louisville, Kentucky USA1 Posts
Well said! I completely agree. When you stop looking for love, that's when you will find it. I hate it soooo much when people tell me that, but unfortunately, it's true.
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Mar 29, 2007 3:05 AM CST My last day
myrosepink
myrosepinkmyrosepinkjakarta, Jakarta Indonesia1 Threads 11 Posts
i believe there is NO such thing as love
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Mar 29, 2007 6:20 AM CST My last day
Konigsberg
KonigsbergKonigsbergJurassic Park (Site B), Nova Scotia Canada57 Threads 3 Polls 8,448 Posts
it is very complicated question ... Love is a pure feeling.

when we say I love you ... we must feel it deep, deep inside not just in a heart and brain .......... Our souls are the holders of Love

yes, I agree it is overused conversing
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