Feelings ( Archived) (9)

Jan 3, 2006 4:47 PM CST Feelings
chance2485
chance2485chance2485cabin in the woods, Michigan USA123 Threads 1,365 Posts
Flowing like cool water in a stream..
Winding and turning like a road traveled..
Sun shine with such warmth..
Like a breeze blowing across my skin..
A dance not yet danced..
Desires not full filled..
Spinning out of control..
Like a small child..
In a meadow of sweet flowers..
Innocence present,fear unknown..
Stretching arms,as wanting to be held..
Kiss press with fingers on my lips..
Women but, inward such a child..
Need to be loved,and to nurture as one..
Touch felt from a far..
Love is what?
Smiles,joy,and heart pain felt..
Bursting outward..
If asked, could you tell me..
Describe them,touch them..
Are they real?
Or made up in your mind..
This inside my heart..
When your near..
Can only be said,in one word..
Love or lust,no..
Feelings..
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Jan 3, 2006 4:55 PM CST Feelings
Raynew
RaynewRaynewConcord, North Carolina USA99 Threads 2,400 Posts
Another good one Sharon. :)
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Jan 3, 2006 5:04 PM CST Feelings
chance2485
chance2485chance2485cabin in the woods, Michigan USA123 Threads 1,365 Posts
Thank you Earl,glad you read them too..
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Jan 3, 2006 5:38 PM CST Feelings
doug_344
doug_344doug_344grand rapids, Michigan USA33 Threads 365 Posts
that was really nice. i have one i wrote a few years ago for my son when my marriage fell apart and i thought this would be a good place to post it since the thread is feelings.
I try to be a man.
one you can look up to.
couldnt keep our family together.
now i just have you.
work my fingers to the bone to give what i can.
is it enough?
you cry constantly wanting mommy and daddy together.
it hurts so much.
I'M SORRY!!
i am giving up everything to give you what i feel i never had..
a daddy that loves you and will never hurt you..
one to spend all the time he can with you..
i'm far from perfect..
i would be with you every day if i could..
when i'm not you're always in my heart..
i know i cry alot and it seems like i'm always sad..
don't ever think think its your fault!!
if being lonely is all it takes to be there for you..
thats the price i'll pay..
your worth it!!

not the greatest but i think it got my point across and to this day it brings tears to my eyes..
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Jan 3, 2006 5:44 PM CST Feelings
RainbowSlider
RainbowSliderRainbowSliderYellville, USA171 Threads 7,174 Posts
Feelings, it is what makes us what we are, Sharon, thanks for sharing.

Doug, the tears are what makes us human. Only humans can touch and feel touched.

Roy
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Jan 3, 2006 5:54 PM CST Feelings
chance2485
chance2485chance2485cabin in the woods, Michigan USA123 Threads 1,365 Posts
Doug nice to meet you,thank you..
It's always sad ,when children have to deal with
adult problem..You sound Like a wonderful dad..very
nice and heart felt..good luck on your search at cs..

Chance
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Jan 3, 2006 5:57 PM CST Feelings
chance2485
chance2485chance2485cabin in the woods, Michigan USA123 Threads 1,365 Posts
Roy, some women view tears from a man as strength..
and she know he has a heart..

Thank you Roy,your right feeling are whats inside..and
who we are..
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Jan 3, 2006 6:20 PM CST Feelings
RainbowSlider
RainbowSliderRainbowSliderYellville, USA171 Threads 7,174 Posts
Yes, I agree, Sharon. The whole spectrum of feelings and emotions. Mood swings, too for that matter. They have come a long way with robotics, electronics and the like but try to make a human. It still takes humans to do that. It is good to feel.
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Jan 4, 2006 12:41 AM CST Feelings
yellow_rose64
yellow_rose64yellow_rose64Stickville, Indiana USA29 Threads 1,123 Posts
Another beautiful one Sharon. We all have feelings deep inside that nobody can understand.

Doug, nice one too, very touching. My kids were tore apart also when I went through my divorce. Wish you luck on your search here.


Rose.
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