Poetry Contest ( Archived) (29)

Oct 15, 2007 7:20 PM CST Poetry Contest
Mysticalguy
MysticalguyMysticalguyEvansville, USA38 Threads 1,164 Posts
rolling on the floor laughing rolling on the floor laughing It was nothing major
I guess I was in error
I just saw to my horror
That you had put me under
But it's okay, next time I'll do better!

thumbs up tongue
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Oct 15, 2007 7:33 PM CST Poetry Contest
bajnblue, when I said "For some it may be too easy" I was thinking of you! I was certain you knew the Frost poem by heart and I was hoping you would wait before posting it. As it turned out this thread, thankfully, took a wrong turn, a "Road less travelled" so to speak.

Maybe someone will start another similar thread.

If I do it, I'm donning a bulletproof vest first though.rolling on the floor laughing
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Oct 15, 2007 7:48 PM CST Poetry Contest
Man that was awesome! I love that opening line,

"I know that though it seems the snow
Has brought the gray you fear"

You have talent my good man!
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Oct 15, 2007 7:50 PM CST Poetry Contest
bajanblue
bajanbluebajanblueSpeightstown, Saint Peter Barbados344 Threads 1 Polls 3,724 Posts
Actually I do know it by heart, but in my reading /hearing it in my head the rhyming words don't have the same impact so I didn't recognise their origins.
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Oct 15, 2007 7:51 PM CST Poetry Contest
Scottrssll
ScottrssllScottrssllNorfolk, Virginia USA12 Threads 266 Posts
Why, thank you, thank you very kindly.... Us musicians are way too critical of ourselves, so I don't write nearly as much as I should.....But thank-you for the complimentcheers cheers
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Oct 15, 2007 7:53 PM CST Poetry Contest
Scottrssll
ScottrssllScottrssllNorfolk, Virginia USA12 Threads 266 Posts
And, I thought a poem like thst would be appropriate given the theme of this site.....beer
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Oct 15, 2007 7:53 PM CST Poetry Contest
Scottrssll
ScottrssllScottrssllNorfolk, Virginia USA12 Threads 266 Posts
*that
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Oct 16, 2007 9:47 AM CST Poetry Contest
firstllight
firstllightfirstllightStrasburg, Virginia USA6 Threads 1 Polls 815 Posts
I enjoyed your prose as well.
Could you hum a few bars? banana
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Oct 16, 2007 12:21 PM CST Poetry Contest
Galactic_bodhi
Galactic_bodhiGalactic_bodhiAkron, Ohio USA609 Threads 1 Polls 9,196 Posts
Ya know, I knew I shouldn't have posted anything...

Carry on, dear competitors...

This following thus why I submit naught, nor am I published...

To be ignored, perhaps to fade away,
This honest rhyme, will haunt to dying day.
It's not worth a tantrum, or a kicking of the feet,
It proves the world is rain-shed shallow,
With a scarecrow's paltry powers of cognition,
Perhaps with flash, I might attract attention
Thirty seconds, maybe, of honorable mention.

That's all right, that's okay, as ee cummings said...

Thanks for nothing, and for nothing, thanks anyway.
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