A Tear Drop Fell (5)
Powerful, sad and familiar. Very thought provoking.
And a warning that neglect will lead to great loss.
And a warning that neglect will lead to great loss.
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Very nice!
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Thank you for the comments. Yes, this is something I went through and I believe we all do at some point in our lives. If anything came of it, I got back into writing. 
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very nice 
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As if to have known you once before
I loved your smell and breathed it slowly
Capturing your scent within my mind
Stirring my inner being, savagely wanting and needing
My Spirit would soar and dance for days
I fell in love with you
And yet as I shared those feelings
You pulled back denying
except the one
Ahhhh, my dear big daddie….as a flower grows yet no nourishment…dies
So my feelings…died
In my mind it ended
Even before you knew
I then denied
A tear drop fell as I wondered
Were you even worth my love
Then tear drops fell