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Mar 4, 2008 10:40 AM CST The Sin
longbird
longbirdlongbirdTehran, Iran5 Threads 35 Posts
The Sin

I sinned, a sin all filled with pleasure
wrapped in an embraced, warm and fiery
I sinned in a pair of arms
that were vibrant, virile, violent.

In that dim and quiet place of seclusion
I looked into his eyes brimming with mystery
my heart throbbed in my chest all too excited
by the desire glowing in his eyes.


In that dim and quiet place of seclusion
as I sat next to him all scattered inside
his lips poured lust on my lips
and I left behind the sorrows of my heart.


I whispered in his ear these words of love:
“I want you, mate of my soul
I want you, life-giving embrace
I want you, lover gone mad”

Desire surged in his eyes
red wine swirled in the cup
my body surfed all over his
in the softness of the downy bed.

I sinned, a sin all filled with pleasure
next to a body now limp and languid
I know not what I did, God
in that dim and quiet place of seclusion.

Forogh Farokhzad
Translated by Ahmad Karimi-Hakkak, Remembering The Flight,

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Mar 4, 2008 10:51 AM CST The Sin
Detente
DetenteDetenteNorth West, England UK48 Threads 1 Polls 2,742 Posts
That's wonderful...many thanks.cheers
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Mar 4, 2008 11:55 AM CST The Sin
riyablossom
riyablossomriyablossomsomewhere, Pennsylvania USA184 Threads 18 Polls 11,244 Posts
beautiful !!
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Mar 4, 2008 1:29 PM CST The Sin
longbird
longbirdlongbirdTehran, Iran5 Threads 35 Posts
Detente: That's wonderful...many thanks.
you are welcome!cheers
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Mar 4, 2008 1:32 PM CST The Sin
longbird
longbirdlongbirdTehran, Iran5 Threads 35 Posts
riyablossom: beautiful !!
you too! wave
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Mar 4, 2008 1:45 PM CST The Sin
longbird
longbirdlongbirdTehran, Iran5 Threads 35 Posts
Forough Farrokhzad
The most famous woman in the history of Persian literature

Forough Farrokhzad was born on January 5, 1935 in Tehran into a middle class family of seven children (the third of seven children). She attended public schools through the ninth grade, thereafter graduating from junior high school at the age of fifteen; she transferred to Kamalolmolk Technical School, where she studied dressmaking and painting.

In 1951 at sixteen Forough married her cousin Parviz Shapour over the objections of families mainly because of Shapour's age. And a year later Forough's first and only son "Kamyar" was born. Frough separated from Parviz Shapour in 1954. Forough relinquished her son to her ex-husband's family in order to pursue her calling in poetry and independent life style.

In 1955 Forough's first collection, titled Asir (The Captive), contains forty-four poems was published. And in September that year she suffered a nervous breakdown and was taken to a psychiatric clinic.

In July 1956 Forough left Iran for the first time on a nine-months trip to Europe. In this year her second volume of verse, containing twenty-five short lyrics, called Divar (The Wall), was published, dedicated to her former husband.

In 1958 Forough's third collection Esian (Rebellion), appeared and securely established her as promising yet notorious poet. Forough's relationship with the controversial writer and cinematographer Ebrahim Golestan began and remained important in the poet's personal life until her death.

In 1963 UNESCO produced a thirty minutes movie about Forough. Also Bernardo Bertolucci came to Iran to Interview her and decided to produce a fifteen minutes movie about the poet's life.

In 1964 Forough's fourth poetry collection, Tavallodi Digar (Another Birth), contained thirty-five poems which the poet had composed over a period of nearly six years was published.

In 1965 Forough's fifth collection of verse called "Let Us Believe In The Beginning Of The Cold Season" is in print and was published after her death.

On Monday February 14, 1967 Forough visited her mother, who later recalled their conversation over lunch as the nicest that they ever had. From her mother's home, on the way back, with Forough driving, at the intersection of Marvdasht and Loqumanoddowleh Streets in Darrus, her jeep station wagon swerved to avoid an oncoming vehicle and struck a wall. Thrown from her car, at the height of her creativity and barely thirty-two Forough Farrokhzad died of head injuries. She was buried beneath the falling snow in the Zahiro-Doleh in Tehran.


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Mar 4, 2008 1:48 PM CST The Sin
jbibiza
jbibizajbibizaCasinos, Valencia Spain94 Threads 4 Polls 4,914 Posts
I think it's a shame that making love is considered a sin... in spite of the beauty of the words
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Mar 4, 2008 1:51 PM CST The Sin
ltlmstrouble
ltlmstroubleltlmstroubleMilton Keynes, Buckinghamshire, England UK7 Threads 1,635 Posts
wonderful -----

Thank youthumbs up hug
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Mar 4, 2008 1:54 PM CST The Sin
longbird
longbirdlongbirdTehran, Iran5 Threads 35 Posts
jbibiza: I think it's a shame that making love is considered a sin... in spite of the beauty of the words


Did not you find something more positive? please remember love making without marriage even now is sin in many countries and she cited this poem about 50 years ago in Iran! Please let be fair and do not be refree of others according to the norms of society and time which we live!
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Mar 4, 2008 1:58 PM CST The Sin
longbird
longbirdlongbirdTehran, Iran5 Threads 35 Posts
ltlmstrouble: wonderful -----

Thank you
you are welcome! hug
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Mar 4, 2008 2:04 PM CST The Sin
jbibiza
jbibizajbibizaCasinos, Valencia Spain94 Threads 4 Polls 4,914 Posts
longbird: Did not you find something more positive? please remember love making without marriage even now is sin in many countries and she cited this poem about 50 years ago in Iran! Please let be fair and do not be refree of others according to the norms of society and time which we live!


I did say that I found beauty in the words, but I also stand by my opinion whether it was yesterday or 500 years ago, I find it tragic that anyone could consider making love to be a sin... especially as beautifully portrayed as this
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Mar 4, 2008 2:12 PM CST The Sin
longbird
longbirdlongbirdTehran, Iran5 Threads 35 Posts
jbibiza: I did say that I found beauty in the words, but I also stand by my opinion whether it was yesterday or 500 years ago, I find it tragic that anyone could consider making love to be a sin... especially as beautifully portrayed as this

Sorry, You are right! I misunderstood you!

You know there are some few friends!!! here that their duty is making problem for others and for a second I thought you are one of them!but you are not! Excuse me!
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Mar 4, 2008 2:12 PM CST The Sin
ltlmstrouble
ltlmstroubleltlmstroubleMilton Keynes, Buckinghamshire, England UK7 Threads 1,635 Posts
jbibiza: I did say that I found beauty in the words, but I also stand by my opinion whether it was yesterday or 500 years ago, I find it tragic that anyone could consider making love to be a sin... especially as beautifully portrayed as this


Perhaps it relates to an extramarital affair? That is what I thought of when I read it.


teddybear
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Mar 4, 2008 2:18 PM CST The Sin
longbird
longbirdlongbirdTehran, Iran5 Threads 35 Posts
ltlmstrouble: Perhaps it relates to an extramarital affair? That is what I thought of when I read it.

I think so!

She loved to break the norms of society!but I love her!
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Mar 4, 2008 2:28 PM CST The Sin
jbibiza
jbibizajbibizaCasinos, Valencia Spain94 Threads 4 Polls 4,914 Posts
ltlmstrouble: Perhaps it relates to an extramarital affair? That is what I thought of when I read it.


In a different society then the writer is from that might have come to mind, but the culture that this elegant writer comes from views any acts of love that a woman takes part in outside of marriage to be a sin... I know that other cultures do as well... Christian etc. anyway that's a topic for another thread, don't get me started on my soap box...laugh
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