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Apr 13, 2008 8:23 PM CST moon lunacy
gingerb
gingerbgingerbLetterkenny, Donegal Ireland7 Threads 1 Polls 4,139 Posts
Moon Lunacy


Let mystical, mica-glistening
effervescent moonlight lead your rhythm crazy.

Dance drunkenly, soul a whistling
whip-a-diddle tunes, till everything's gone hazy.

Dream of skipping, dewdrop sipping,
wind a nipping, skinny dipping
on a lunar night.

On a lunar blue night when the moon is bright.
When everything we do is good
and every moment right.

Waltz wantonly in the bubbling
beams alight with mist, so feet no longer ground you.

Lie languidly, tenderness troubling
pores aflush with fire, let lymphic glow surround you.

Dream of tripping, cartwheel flipping,
bedpost gripping, nightshirt ripping,
on a lunar night.

On a lunar blue night when the moon is bright.
When everything we do is good
and every moment right.
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Apr 13, 2008 8:24 PM CST moon lunacy
gingerb
gingerbgingerbLetterkenny, Donegal Ireland7 Threads 1 Polls 4,139 Posts
Not as good at this as Bajanblue, but making an attempt.......
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Apr 13, 2008 8:32 PM CST moon lunacy
Zarah
ZarahZarahdublin, Dublin Ireland28 Threads 1,388 Posts
gingerb: Not as good at this as Bajanblue, but making an attempt.......


Its fabulous honey...

Its hard to write feelings into words, sometimes they corrupt but the heart beckons....
Poetry is a beautiful expression that should be shared..hug
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Apr 13, 2008 8:32 PM CST moon lunacy
bajanblue
bajanbluebajanblueSpeightstown, Saint Peter Barbados344 Threads 1 Polls 3,724 Posts
gingerb: Not as good at this as Bajanblue, but making an attempt.......


Don't tell anyone, but I like it better than mine.

Moon madness, passion and beauty all caught in a rhythm that makes me want to laugh out loud and dance!thumbs up

Thank you.wave
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Apr 13, 2008 8:35 PM CST moon lunacy
gingerb
gingerbgingerbLetterkenny, Donegal Ireland7 Threads 1 Polls 4,139 Posts
Zarah and Bajanblue thank you so much for your kind words. They give me encouragement for future attempts. wine
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Apr 13, 2008 8:41 PM CST moon lunacy
Zarah
ZarahZarahdublin, Dublin Ireland28 Threads 1,388 Posts
gingerb: Zarah and Bajanblue thank you so much for your kind words. They give me encouragement for future attempts.


Don't ever stop...
Poetry is not only a means by which to explore your own journey of self discovery...it can move us to reflect on our own personal experiences and speaks the truth in all our lives, as the pebble resonates in ever enlarging circles...

wine bouquet
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Apr 13, 2008 8:45 PM CST moon lunacy
patrickthomas
patrickthomaspatrickthomasMullingar, Westmeath Ireland33 Threads 4 Polls 1,911 Posts
This has a lovely rhythm and pace, read it out loud to a friend and they loved it too. thumbs up
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Apr 13, 2008 8:48 PM CST moon lunacy
gingerb
gingerbgingerbLetterkenny, Donegal Ireland7 Threads 1 Polls 4,139 Posts
patrickthomas: This has a lovely rhythm and pace, read it out loud to a friend and they loved it too.


So glad you enjoyed it, thank you for taking the time to read it. bouquet
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Apr 13, 2008 8:49 PM CST moon lunacy
gingerb
gingerbgingerbLetterkenny, Donegal Ireland7 Threads 1 Polls 4,139 Posts
Zarah: Don't ever stop...
Poetry is not only a means by which to explore your own journey of self discovery...it can move us to reflect on our own personal experiences and speaks the truth in all our lives, as the pebble resonates in ever enlarging circles...


Your posts even sound like poetry. bouquet
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Apr 13, 2008 9:05 PM CST moon lunacy
Zarah
ZarahZarahdublin, Dublin Ireland28 Threads 1,388 Posts
gingerb: Your posts even sound like poetry.


Ha! no I leave the words to you....I paint acrylics, ....work as a doctor just so I am not the impoverished artist but I guess thats the expectation for artists....creativity connects me to sanity time.
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Apr 13, 2008 9:12 PM CST moon lunacy
gingerb
gingerbgingerbLetterkenny, Donegal Ireland7 Threads 1 Polls 4,139 Posts
Zarah: Ha! no I leave the words to you....I paint acrylics, ....work as a doctor just so I am not the impoverished artist but I guess thats the expectation for artists....creativity connects me to sanity time.


What genre of painting are you into? I dabble in all sorts of painting and sculpture myself. It is easy to understand your need for creativity when you are dealing with life and death problems every day.
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Apr 13, 2008 9:27 PM CST moon lunacy
thumbs up
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Apr 13, 2008 9:36 PM CST moon lunacy
irishlass45
irishlass45irishlass45Texas USA, Texas USA52 Threads 5 Polls 4,579 Posts
Hark! someone mentioned a moon again? I heard the call, thank you for sharing that, very different like upbeat poetry, coolapplause
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Apr 13, 2008 9:44 PM CST moon lunacy
gingerb
gingerbgingerbLetterkenny, Donegal Ireland7 Threads 1 Polls 4,139 Posts
irishlass45: Hark! someone mentioned a moon again? I heard the call, thank you for sharing that, very different like upbeat poetry, cool


wine yw
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Apr 13, 2008 9:45 PM CST moon lunacy
gingerb
gingerbgingerbLetterkenny, Donegal Ireland7 Threads 1 Polls 4,139 Posts
wine ty
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Apr 14, 2008 7:48 AM CST moon lunacy
Verthandi
VerthandiVerthandiAugusta, Maine USA9 Threads 87 Posts
Gingerb, this is very well done. I like the tempo and the images that the words conjure up. wine
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Apr 14, 2008 9:16 AM CST moon lunacy
gingerb
gingerbgingerbLetterkenny, Donegal Ireland7 Threads 1 Polls 4,139 Posts
Verthandi: Gingerb, this is very well done. I like the tempo and the images that the words conjure up.


Glad you liked it bouquet
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Apr 14, 2008 12:12 PM CST moon lunacy
class
classclassLiverpool, Merseyside, England UK143 Threads 809 Posts
what a charming "whip-a-diddle tune"
head banger
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Apr 14, 2008 12:58 PM CST moon lunacy
gingerb
gingerbgingerbLetterkenny, Donegal Ireland7 Threads 1 Polls 4,139 Posts
class: what a charming "whip-a-diddle tune"


The pleasure was all mine

laugh
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Apr 14, 2008 1:08 PM CST moon lunacy
rescuemepleez
rescuemepleezrescuemepleezclydebank, Strathclyde, Scotland UK9 Threads 459 Posts
What you do have girl is TALENT and it is all yours how fab is that..big pat on the back for a beautiful poem....thanks for that..
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