Almost Home (10)
Be your own child we all can play
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BnaturAl: Children play,
in sand.
While adults play with life.
Children,
having time.
While adults waste away;
childishly-
Pensive adults,
With childrens fears,
Learned from days and longer years.
Children, with clean hands
Unknowing.
Almost Home
Clouded by age
A presence overlooked.
in sand.
While adults play with life.
Children,
having time.
While adults waste away;
childishly-
Pensive adults,
With childrens fears,
Learned from days and longer years.
Children, with clean hands
Unknowing.
Almost Home
Clouded by age
A presence overlooked.
Profound and very beautiful. Have you been published?
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Nice one Al 
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gingerb: Profound and very beautiful. Have you been published?
Thankyou.
published .. today is my second publication
waiting for the CS royalty checks.
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trish123: Nice one Al
thanks trish
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cutypie: Be your own child we all can play
make the time, its short.
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BnaturAl: Thankyou.
published .. today is my second publication waiting for the CS royalty checks.
published .. today is my second publication waiting for the CS royalty checks.
Ever heard of a site called allpoetry.com or voices.net? Great feedback on allpoetry.com to help any aspiring poet to get better. Not saying to you need that, you don't, but I found it helpful when I started out on here to broaden my horizons so to speak. Lots of fun and great people on there too. Just a thought.------ This thread is Archived ------
gingerb: Ever heard of a site called allpoetry.com or voices.net? Great feedback on allpoetry.com to help any aspiring poet to get better. Not saying to you need that, you don't, but I found it helpful when I started out on here to broaden my horizons so to speak. Lots of fun and great people on there too. Just a thought.
thanks gingerb ... but I am totally against getting better
I also have some rather strange thoughts (as in, not the norm) about environmental concoctions and influence in artistic inspiration.
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Tanks! 
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in sand.
While adults play with life.
Children,
having time.
While adults waste away;
childishly-
Pensive adults,
With childrens fears,
Learned from days and longer years.
Children, with clean hands
Unknowing.
Almost Home
Clouded by age
A presence overlooked.