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Aug 22, 2008 1:47 PM CST last night {protection of the night}
keytone
keytonekeytonePortland, Oregon USA36 Threads 3 Polls 1,686 Posts
Last Night {protection of the night}

in the morning sunlight hits
all the edges of those dreams
written deep the night before
sunlight closes fast that darkened door
like a shadow dancing live
I vanish when the darkness disapears

where to go and whats it matter
all the magic ceases when you return
painted pictures, canpy wrappers
canvas wet and melted snackers
off to work like dragon slayer
the mind is sure to to make it happen

written lines within the mind
of what a day it might just be
a real life adventure there
into the sun is always set
for those who choose to walk that step
careful now and dont you trip

glitter man of flesh and fear
of candy smiles and rituals
kick the bag and feel the thrill
it really squelches tears
of yesterday and further still
the picture still remains.

glad to fall asleep last night
though I dont know the difference
I just snap a image to the mind
try to keep a closed eye
endure the dream, reacall the joy
the crane, the snap, the dance alone

the mantis, praying for the kill
enduring future bloods that spill.

Bettis
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Aug 24, 2008 5:50 AM CST last night {protection of the night}
keytone
keytonekeytonePortland, Oregon USA36 Threads 3 Polls 1,686 Posts
"Sleep Dep"


sleep dep,
wrote a letter didnt send
slept tight,
woke as though they read my rights
walked fast, didnt eat,
heard the blast of my TV
Turned to you as if to say
but then I saw you went away
sun shine,
Walked until I saw the mile
big moon
Loved you in the month of June
right on
right until I found I'm wrong
sit tight
Waiting till we fly a kite.

As we sleep and as the night
is all we have to set things right
Walking to you in the sun
Hope we always have that fun
throw the tv off the deck
at the one who yelled at us
yelled at us beneath the moon
but we just danced that month of June
and though we might not fly that kite
I pray for both of us we might
someday somehow find the time
to feel the love that still lives on.

Bettis

rose
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Aug 24, 2008 5:59 AM CST last night {protection of the night}
Daniel4021
Daniel4021Daniel4021Somewhere, Tennessee USA157 Threads 8,986 Posts
Both are excellent Bettis.. songs right?
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Aug 24, 2008 6:02 AM CST last night {protection of the night}
keytone
keytonekeytonePortland, Oregon USA36 Threads 3 Polls 1,686 Posts
Daniel4021: Both are excellent Bettis.. songs right?

thanks Daniel...they can be,,I ussually have a little music in my mind when I am writing.
i really don't usssually post my stuf here,, but what the heck.
Good Morning!
;-}
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Aug 24, 2008 6:06 AM CST last night {protection of the night}
Daniel4021
Daniel4021Daniel4021Somewhere, Tennessee USA157 Threads 8,986 Posts
keytone: thanks Daniel...they can be,,I ussually have a little music in my mind when I am writing.
i really don't usssually post my stuf here,, but what the heck.
Good Morning!
;-}


Good morning, glad you did.. I think if a person has a good tallent they should share it when opportunity presents itself.. jmo..
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Aug 24, 2008 6:18 AM CST last night {protection of the night}
keytone
keytonekeytonePortland, Oregon USA36 Threads 3 Polls 1,686 Posts
Daniel4021: Good morning, glad you did.. I think if a person has a good tallent they should share it when opportunity presents itself.. jmo..

Agreed, sometimes just a bit skidish I think of the critics...
;-}
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Aug 24, 2008 6:47 AM CST last night {protection of the night}
Daniel4021
Daniel4021Daniel4021Somewhere, Tennessee USA157 Threads 8,986 Posts
keytone: Agreed, sometimes just a bit skidish I think of the critics...
;-}


I don't worry about them when I post my poems.. hey to each their own you know..wave
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Aug 24, 2008 6:53 AM CST last night {protection of the night}
trish123
trish123trish123Macclesfield, Cheshire, England UK177 Threads 4 Polls 13,724 Posts
keytone: thanks Daniel...they can be,,I ussually have a little music in my mind when I am writing.
i really don't usssually post my stuf here,, but what the heck.
Good Morning!
;-}


Good poems/songs Bettis thumbs up wave hug
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Aug 24, 2008 6:59 AM CST last night {protection of the night}
Daniel4021
Daniel4021Daniel4021Somewhere, Tennessee USA157 Threads 8,986 Posts
trish123: Good poems/songs Bettis


Yep, morning/afternoon Trish..wave
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Aug 24, 2008 7:11 AM CST last night {protection of the night}
trish123
trish123trish123Macclesfield, Cheshire, England UK177 Threads 4 Polls 13,724 Posts
Daniel4021: Yep, morning/afternoon Trish..


Hi Daniel - its just gone 1 pm here and hopefully Ill be able to get out into that garden soon........ wave laugh hug
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Aug 24, 2008 7:12 AM CST last night {protection of the night}
Daniel4021
Daniel4021Daniel4021Somewhere, Tennessee USA157 Threads 8,986 Posts
trish123: Hi Daniel - its just gone 1 pm here and hopefully Ill be able to get out into that garden soon........


I love gardens..innocent
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Aug 24, 2008 7:26 AM CST last night {protection of the night}
jbibiza
jbibizajbibizaCasinos, Valencia Spain94 Threads 4 Polls 4,914 Posts
Lovely images... thank you.
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Aug 24, 2008 7:35 AM CST last night {protection of the night}
rusty_knight
rusty_knightrusty_knightGozo, Malta175 Threads 2 Polls 6,840 Posts
Summer days
Summer nights
The heat of light
The heat of rays

They fill your head
They fill your heart
They make you stop
They make you start

Oh, summer's sun so bathed in heat
Give me a love that burns within
Give me a love I cannot lose
Give me a love that, for me, you choose

Oh, days of heat and passion filled
Then autumn/fall thy passion cools
Lend me thy fireside late in winter's night
That I may life by love's twilight!
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Aug 24, 2008 1:05 PM CST last night {protection of the night}
lola36
lola36lola36dublin, Dublin Ireland120 Threads 4,687 Posts
keytone: "Sleep Dep"sleep dep,
wrote a letter didnt send
slept tight,
woke as though they read my rights
walked fast, didnt eat,
heard the blast of my TV
Turned to you as if to say
but then I saw you went away
sun shine,
Walked until I saw the mile
big moon
Loved you in the month of June
right on
right until I found I'm wrong
sit tight
Waiting till we fly a kite.

As we sleep and as the night
is all we have to set things right
Walking to you in the sun
Hope we always have that fun
throw the tv off the deck
at the one who yelled at us
yelled at us beneath the moon
but we just danced that month of June
and though we might not fly that kite
I pray for both of us we might
someday somehow find the time
to feel the love that still lives on.

Bettis



Very lovely Bettis
hug
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Aug 24, 2008 1:05 PM CST last night {protection of the night}
lola36
lola36lola36dublin, Dublin Ireland120 Threads 4,687 Posts
Daniel4021: Yep, morning/afternoon Trish..


Hi Daniel and everybody...kiss hug
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Aug 24, 2008 1:54 PM CST last night {protection of the night}
Daniel4021
Daniel4021Daniel4021Somewhere, Tennessee USA157 Threads 8,986 Posts
lola36: Hi Daniel and everybody...


Ah, the lovely Margo.. good to see you dear..hug
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Aug 24, 2008 2:17 PM CST last night {protection of the night}
keytone
keytonekeytonePortland, Oregon USA36 Threads 3 Polls 1,686 Posts
lola36: Very lovely Bettis
I'm glad you like it Margo. means a lot to me.
hug
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