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Sep 14, 2008 8:04 AM CST Where am I ?
yoursuperman
yoursupermanyoursupermanLynchburg, Virginia USA34 Threads 3 Polls 838 Posts
Where am i ?


I walked one day and left my car,
Not to long and not very far.
I came to a place that was not my own,
I went in and i was so alone.
The door was made of extra wide wood,
Not to many things different or as it should.
There was a man sitting behind a bar in a chair,
had his head down yelling life wasnt fair.
I thought this was weird but i did say hi,
He looked up with a mean glare and just to say why.
The man looked like me from what i am yet never seen,
I said "wow" this has to be just a dream.
I looked around not another person in site,
Worrying of what this could be as it stayed night.
The man was now gone and i was still alone,
Not a person around not even a phone.
I did see in this mirror across the room,
Near a short burnt out candle behind a old broom.
I had so much fear as i looked away,
Now i am knowing this is becoming a different day.
The light shines so bright and clear,
Just holding on to this bar stool with now i see a beer.
Than a door opens up ,strangers start coming in,
Like a few people lauging with such big grins.
The lights come on and music is playing".
With such a sound"
I realized now to my mind what i have found.
The way it seems with my eyes so red,
I had slept in this bar thinking this was my bed.






cheers cheers
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Sep 14, 2008 8:09 AM CST Where am I ?
Daniel4021
Daniel4021Daniel4021Somewhere, Tennessee USA157 Threads 8,986 Posts
yoursuperman: Where am i ?I walked one day and left my car,
Not to long and not very far.
I came to a place that was not my own,
I went in and i was so alone.
The door was made of extra wide wood,
Not to many things different or as it should.
There was a man sitting behind a bar in a chair,
had his head down yelling life wasnt fair.
I thought this was weird but i did say hi,
He looked up with a mean glare and just to say why.
The man looked like me from what i am yet never seen,
I said "wow" this has to be just a dream.
I looked around not another person in site,
Worrying of what this could be as it stayed night.
The man was now gone and i was still alone,
Not a person around not even a phone.
I did see in this mirror across the room,
Near a short burnt out candle behind a old broom.
I had so much fear as i looked away,
Now i am knowing this is becoming a different day.
The light shines so bright and clear,
Just holding on to this bar stool with now i see a beer.
Than a door opens up ,strangers start coming in,
Like a few people lauging with such big grins.
The lights come on and music is playing".
With such a sound"
I realized now to my mind what i have found.
The way it seems with my eyes so red,
I had slept in this bar thinking this was my bed.


Very good my friend.. interesting read..handshake
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Sep 14, 2008 8:10 AM CST Where am I ?
yoursuperman
yoursupermanyoursupermanLynchburg, Virginia USA34 Threads 3 Polls 838 Posts
Daniel4021: Very good my friend.. interesting read..
Ty Daniel good morning to you.handshake
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Sep 14, 2008 8:11 AM CST Where am I ?
applause x 6

Wondered where youv'e been.Missed youhug
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Sep 14, 2008 8:12 AM CST Where am I ?
yoursuperman
yoursupermanyoursupermanLynchburg, Virginia USA34 Threads 3 Polls 838 Posts
Hey there missed you too! Hope all is well grin
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Sep 14, 2008 8:14 AM CST Where am I ?
Been well but great you are back.Now we need to find Danadunno lips
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Sep 14, 2008 8:15 AM CST Where am I ?
Daniel4021
Daniel4021Daniel4021Somewhere, Tennessee USA157 Threads 8,986 Posts
yoursuperman: Ty Daniel good morning to you.


Good morning to you sir.. good to see you around..handshake
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Sep 14, 2008 8:16 AM CST Where am I ?
kissmedeeply
kissmedeeplykissmedeeplyPetitcodiac, New Brunswick Canada70 Threads 15,139 Posts
I woke up this morning and wonder the same thing..

Where the heck am idunno uh oh confused
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Sep 14, 2008 8:19 AM CST Where am I ?
yoursuperman
yoursupermanyoursupermanLynchburg, Virginia USA34 Threads 3 Polls 838 Posts
kissmedeeply: I woke up this morning and wonder the same thing..

Where the heck am i
LOL still have the bar print on the forhead?
Good morning to ya hug
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Sep 14, 2008 8:20 AM CST Where am I ?
Daniel4021
Daniel4021Daniel4021Somewhere, Tennessee USA157 Threads 8,986 Posts
yoursuperman: LOL still have the bar print on the forhead?
Good morning to ya


Aw man, Gary, you must have really tied one on..comfort laugh
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Sep 14, 2008 8:23 AM CST Where am I ?
kissmedeeply
kissmedeeplykissmedeeplyPetitcodiac, New Brunswick Canada70 Threads 15,139 Posts
yoursuperman: LOL still have the bar print on the forhead?
Good morning to ya


Morning..i hope you have a great sundayhug
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Sep 14, 2008 8:25 AM CST Where am I ?
yoursuperman
yoursupermanyoursupermanLynchburg, Virginia USA34 Threads 3 Polls 838 Posts
Sure did few weeks ago , for birthday get together, I was ok till i got home and past out with tv on the news and they were talking about rescue squad and fire departments and killing and such, i woke up thinking all this happen that night , it shocked me i had no clue what i did .. so needless say i havent drinked anything since.. i did call the place to ask. " did i do anything last night ,they said no, but at times i still think about it .
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Sep 14, 2008 8:43 AM CST Where am I ?
teacherman
teachermanteachermanMilwaukee, Wisconsin USA5 Threads 260 Posts
yoursuperman: Sure did few weeks ago , for birthday get together, I was ok till i got home and past out with tv on the news and they were talking about rescue squad and fire departments and killing and such, i woke up thinking all this happen that night , it shocked me i had no clue what i did .. so needless say i havent drinked anything since.. i did call the place to ask. " did i do anything last night ,they said no, but at times i still think about it .



Several years ago i was living in Las vegas. met some folks in a club that i had a mutual interest with. Went to their hotel and partied.
Stopped at a local store for smokes on the way home.
Next morning I woke up and my car wasn't in the parking lot.
Called Police and reported it stolen.
Walked back to the same store for beverage. There's my car parked where I left it at the store the ni night before. Really embarrassing call back to the cops! WHACK
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Sep 16, 2008 2:29 AM CST Where am I ?
yoursuperman
yoursupermanyoursupermanLynchburg, Virginia USA34 Threads 3 Polls 838 Posts
rolling on the floor laughing Yes i know what you mean
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