THAT WAS MY HEART

by sabeelcochin,kerala., Kerala, India

Aug 2009 676 Views 13 comments

THAT WAS MY HEART...

ONE DAY I MET A BEAUTIFUL GIRL
I COULDNT TALK THAT TIME
BUT I GAVE HER A FLOWER
WITH LOVE
SHE THREW AWAY THE FLOWER
AND WALKED AWAY SOON
BUT, THAT WAS MY HEART...

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Posted: Aug 2009

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sabeelOPcochin,kerala., Kerala IndiaAug 13, 2009

SOMETIMES WE FORGET WHAT REALLY WE GET...

QuietStormFSouthern Ontario, Ontario CanadaAug 13, 2009

I like this one.. short but says soooo much!

poetengineerriyadh, Ar Riyad Saudi ArabiaAug 13, 2009

short but beautiful words as always, it express feelings , thanks for share

aware3navarre, Florida USAAug 13, 2009

Sabeel, Hi ! Thanks for your kind comments on my poetry, and I have to do the same-this poem is so very sweet, it's short, but the depth of what is says cannot be measured ! Very nice, but touching ! Blessings, aware3

sabeelOPcochin,kerala., Kerala IndiaAug 14, 2009

dear poet...QuietStormF..

thank you for your kind comment...
i need these words to keep writing..
thank you..
sabeel.

sabeelOPcochin,kerala., Kerala IndiaAug 14, 2009

dear poet...poetengineer

i like your comments. that help me to go on...
thank you..
sabeel.

sabeelOPcochin,kerala., Kerala IndiaAug 14, 2009

dear poet...aware3

thank you very much for your kind words...
i need encouragements from best poets like you to write more more to become a good poet like you..
thank you.
sabeel.

andrew149Southbourne, nr.Bournemouth, Dorset, England UKAug 19, 2009

Excellent my friend, short sweet and to the point, will pass it on to a girlfriend, I know she will like it. By the way 149 is the last three numbers in my army number from the 70's, I'll never forget it, lol. If you like short, try my poem LIFE, it was the first one I put on here, I wrote it originally in the 70's. Take care.

sabeelOPcochin,kerala., Kerala IndiaAug 19, 2009

DEAR POET ANDREW149,
first of all i honour your life experience..i couldnt guess what you got those days..
any way i am so happy to read your comment..
thank you very much..
sabeel.