confused time

I can't eat, I can't sleep with what's on my mind, I feel depleted and defeated from the evil of mankind.

Everyone believes it when they haven't even seen it, it's quite beautiful how they control the mind, the collective hive, never questioning anything from fear they might die, so what's inside?

The conduits continue the lie, speaking upright and on time, the script scripted for their eyes, telling me to accept it by looking me in the eye.

But their time will come, their lies will come undone, the stars will no longer shine upon anyone under the sun.

The trust is gone in innocent song, I've failed you all and kept pacing along, not knowing where I've come from.

On my own I weather the storm, I remain calm but explode to form, while the Earth rotates without promises made to anyone.

The killer of time fast forwards the rewind, I desire to expire the struggle of reading signs, these dreams of one become futile to be thought of and the grains of sand continue to run.
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Oct 2010

Poems entered on these pages are copyrighted by the authors who entered them. They cannot be reproduced without the author's written consent. © Copyright 2001-2024. All rights reserved.

Post Comment

Comments (4)

SCatlyn
Good writingthumbs up I can't sleep either, feel depleted. Guess if I could sleep, I'd get to feeling better.
Some really outstanding lines you have in there... last line esp.
Hope things improve for you rose
HotrodLarrys
Hey Brother, the poem, I see....Strength, I see Weakness, I see Love that cannot be found... I see emotions, I see happiness, trapped within sadness....I only want to say My Road has been Long and Hard... I Have felt like you feel...teddybear

Tho these are the thing that show us the New Direction...
the things that say, Evaluate your path...and if you dont like that path, get on another one...These are the things that bring us to Maturity.....Do you think you are the only one who faces these days? So look for that path of Peace...Dont give up till you find it.....and when You find it.....they will call you Dad, or Grand Pa....

Today is the first day, of the rest of Your Life... handshake
thanks for sharing..
Hotrod
Redex
With this piece of writing you see it all and will come out stronger. The writing is the first step, and what a write thumbs up
gnj4u
Hi, DarkOwl,
I'm lost in the line The killer of time fast forwards the rewind. What a powerful struggle in confused time as the poet's words explode to form that will weather the storm!
Post Comment - Let others know what you think about this Poem
Report Abuse for this page, if inappropiate

More Poems by Unknown

Stats for this Poem

by Unknown
on Oct 2010
325 Views
Last Viewed: Apr 23
Last Commented: Oct 2010

Feeling Creative?

We use cookies to ensure that you have the best experience possible on our website. Read Our Privacy Policy Here