wish for being dog!(poverty)

once there was a poor family
just the mom and her two boys
one was eleven the other infant
living in their little shelter
one day there was snow outside
people were playing in snow
poor children were watching
behind the broken window
elder one said with happiness
mom i wanna go out and play
mom sead while she was crying
honey u don't have any shoes
mom there is a dog without shoes(infant)
ya we can go out like the dog(elder one)
baby dog is not human,needn't shoes(mom)
we wish we were dog and went out(childeren)
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Posted: Jan 2011
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about poverty

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gnj4u
Hi, behar69,
First, we need to see the problem. Your words paint a clear picture of poverty. Then, we need to understand the causes and the possible solutions. Finally, through love, we need to work toward those solutions. We have our work cut out for us. Thank you for reminding us to get started, again and again, until we are successful in learning to share.
diana5
it actually made me cry!
behar69
thanks for ur comments!
DropTheI
mum's dispair
childrens innocense
beautiful
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