neglecting in love

they think being dumped is a failure
it's a must to reach ur love
falling in love is the main
how come it's happened not the head
for me it's not like that
i won't go out of my path
having a major crush on
dosn't mean she is mine
when i'm in love with her
won't want her to love me
once i had a thing for a gal
i behaved so unlike me now
i thought it's a big deal
and i've gotta get to jet
i went over to her and said
i can't live life without u
she responded me but i can
she ripped my heart out easily
and walked out from me with honor
at first i began to cry loudly
but than i asked myself why
why would i be crying for her
she even dosn't know how i feal
now i know ther is gotta be mutual feelings
and things will come to gather to be with ur love
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Posted: Jan 2011
About this poem:
just practicing

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john89
it was nice and perfect! i'm one of ur big fans.
behar69
thank u john89!
hey everybody! please write ur comments,i wanna improve my...
gnj4u
Hi, behar69,
now i know ther is gotta be a mutual feeling... Although there doesn't have to be a mutual feeling for one to love, feelings of love do need to be mutual for love to grow. And, love enables us to become our true selves - not someone we don't recognize. Thought-provoking write.
behar69
thanks gnj4u! well i think being with ur love need to that mutual feelings! without being with ur love how is love gonna grow?
sophiasummer
now i know there is gotta be mutual feelings,
things will come,gather to be


Hi behar69

One can always live and breath without someone.
It is upon yourself to breath,...... your choice.

We can love and not be in love, at times it mystifies one, when more the feelings are free.

Your write is soulful.......and as a poet must...a poet must.


Keep your quill writing..

Soph
xx
mikeoldfield
she ripped my heart out easily
and walked out from me with honor


nice!
niah9
behar...you are at the very beginning of romance, and it's refreshing to see from your eyes and emotions how it feels.
You will progress...and have no doubt a fine poet...good write. Niahgrin
behar69
thank u soph! but my mean is being with ur love not be in love with!
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