they think being dumped is a failure it's a must to reach ur love falling in love is the main how come it's happened not the head for me it's not like that i won't go out of my path having a major crush on dosn't mean she is mine when i'm in love with her won't want her to love me once i had a thing for a gal i behaved so unlike me now i thought it's a big deal and i've gotta get to jet i went over to her and said i can't live life without u she responded me but i can she ripped my heart out easily and walked out from me with honor at first i began to cry loudly but than i asked myself why why would i be crying for her she even dosn't know how i feal now i know ther is gotta be mutual feelings and things will come to gather to be with ur love
Hi, behar69, now i know ther is gotta be a mutual feeling... Although there doesn't have to be a mutual feeling for one to love, feelings of love do need to be mutual for love to grow. And, love enables us to become our true selves - not someone we don't recognize. Thought-provoking write.
behar69OPmariwan, IranJan 16, 2011
thanks gnj4u! well i think being with ur love need to that mutual feelings! without being with ur love how is love gonna grow?
now i know there is gotta be mutual feelings, things will come,gather to be
Hi behar69
One can always live and breath without someone. It is upon yourself to breath,...... your choice.
We can love and not be in love, at times it mystifies one, when more the feelings are free.
Your write is soulful.......and as a poet must...a poet must.
Keep your quill writing..
Soph xx
mikeoldfieldKurdistan, IranJan 16, 2011
she ripped my heart out easily and walked out from me with honor
nice!
niah9Auckland, New ZealandJan 16, 2011
behar...you are at the very beginning of romance, and it's refreshing to see from your eyes and emotions how it feels. You will progress...and have no doubt a fine poet...good write. Niah
behar69OPmariwan, IranJan 17, 2011
thank u soph! but my mean is being with ur love not be in love with!
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now i know ther is gotta be a mutual feeling... Although there doesn't have to be a mutual feeling for one to love, feelings of love do need to be mutual for love to grow. And, love enables us to become our true selves - not someone we don't recognize. Thought-provoking write.
things will come,gather to be
Hi behar69
One can always live and breath without someone.
It is upon yourself to breath,...... your choice.
We can love and not be in love, at times it mystifies one, when more the feelings are free.
Your write is soulful.......and as a poet must...a poet must.
Keep your quill writing..
Soph
xx
and walked out from me with honor
nice!
You will progress...and have no doubt a fine poet...good write. Niah