A face you appear and a face within many faces with many, one face with some one inside, another not so clear one is a face inside out make one in one and one of one my dear face not one is a face lost face a one is forever
I liked it!! No...I loved it! There is much depth and meaning in these few words....well done
magykmirOPbeijing, Beijing ChinaJan 28, 2011
@Jazzy75: You are being kind. Thanks for the appreciation. This is my favourite poem. I was trying to compile a poem on many masks we wear....have come across many people who pretend to be something while in reality they are different.
moonontideSydney, New South Wales AustraliaJan 28, 2011
I also truly like your poem. It says to me a true face does not hide in its other faces. A one face is a forever face because it is clear and OPEN. For me this top marks I loved it. Thankyou
magykmirOPbeijing, Beijing ChinaJan 29, 2011
Thank you so much Moonontide. Your comment is really encouraging. Thanks again.
niah9Auckland, New ZealandJan 29, 2011
Yes...I saw it as someone who wears many faces....don't you hate them when they lie.....nice write...Niah
magykmirOPbeijing, Beijing ChinaFeb 6, 2011
This one is for people who pretend, for those hypocrites...
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It says to me a true face does not hide in its other faces.
A one face is a forever face because it is clear and OPEN.
For me this top marks
I loved it. Thankyou