Love Lost

I wonder if you think of me
when she is in your arms?
Do you miss my tender touch, my smile,
my smell, my charms?

Or do you put me out of mind
pretend I don't exist...
The girl in me that once you found so
tempting, you simply couldn't resist.

Does she smile so longingly the way
I smiled at you?
When your apart does she feel the way I feel,
so lonely, sad and blue.

I never felt the way I feel,
so hurt, so pained, unloved...
The tiny little girl in me just
wanting all you love

Is it so hard to love me,
what is it that I lack?
Is it beauty, mind or spirit,
because my love you have...

I gave you all I could give,
I even gave my soul,
The devil he is laughing now,
for he has won his goal!

Well I guess this is the end,
with heavy heart I say...
Maybe I will heal, who knows
and love again one day
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Feb 2011
About this poem:
This poem was written while feeling the rejection, hurt and pain of losing someone I loved very much... it is one of the very first poems I have ever written and would welcome any comments good or bad thanks Julia

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Macduff5
Julia, can I be your first. You are obviously feeling a bit spurned. Your poem is lovely and expresses what many people go through at some time in their life. So look up and look onwards and believe in yourself.hug
Ladybee42
What can I say Julia - except this was me Sept 2007 and in utter shock! dunno Who knows why these things happen, we just know they do and some day you will look back and smile at what was the beginning of a new chapter of your life. hug thumbs up wave

teddybear teddybear
jazzy75
Stiring emotions...you express very well. I look forward to more poetry from you!thumbs up
serpico12
hi julia65..you expressed your feeling and emotions very well in this poem, a sad time for you and in the pain you wrote this very very well...
good writing...maybe one day this will not be so sad for you..hope so...thumbs up
Julia65
Thanks for all your thoughts and comments teddybear
boyshchrm6
Excellent Julia. Your thoughts are not uncommon, but very
well exspressed. You must accept it is what it is and move on
as quickly as you dare. comfort angel comfort
gnj4u
Hi, Julia65,
We love some; others love us; but, a love shared - what bliss! When that love is lost, there is only sadness (that takes its own time to leave), memories, and the promise of tomorrow. Your poem captures well the feelings of loss and the question that many, if not all, ask themselves, "I wonder if you think of me..." Well done!
pilgrimageoflove
julia65
very good for a first poem.
carries the emotion.

'The tiny little girl in me just
wanting all you love"

Isnt it funny, when in love, one feels so young.
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