Love compared

I do not resemble your other lovers, my lady
should another give you a cloud
I give you rain
Should he give you a lantern, I
will give you the moon
Should he give you a branch
I will give you the trees
And if another gives you a ship
I shall give you the journey
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Posted: Feb 2011

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swade777
Ibram, this is FANTASTIC!!! Especially that closing line! You have the ability "Thru LOVE" to do better for the one you love than anyone else could ever do. WoW!! This is short, but what POWER it brings with it!!! GREAT WRITE!! Wish I would've come up with this one!!!!head banger
Fellsman
Succinct and passionate...

Regards

Fellsman
aware3
Ibram Hello !
This is so beautifully said
And sure to turn any woman's head...aware3

And Hey there swade777, How r you ? I have been out of the loop for awhile. wave
niah9
Oh imbram...wonderful......no woman would compare you to another, you are truly unique....Niahwow wow teddybear
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