I do not resemble your other lovers, my lady should another give you a cloud I give you rain Should he give you a lantern, I will give you the moon Should he give you a branch I will give you the trees And if another gives you a ship I shall give you the journey
Ibram, this is FANTASTIC!!! Especially that closing line! You have the ability "Thru LOVE" to do better for the one you love than anyone else could ever do. WoW!! This is short, but what POWER it brings with it!!! GREAT WRITE!! Wish I would've come up with this one!!!!
FellsmanLake District, Cumbria, England UKFeb 8, 2011
Succinct and passionate...
Regards
Fellsman
aware3navarre, Florida USAFeb 8, 2011
Ibram Hello ! This is so beautifully said And sure to turn any woman's head...aware3
And Hey there swade777, How r you ? I have been out of the loop for awhile.
niah9Auckland, New ZealandFeb 9, 2011
Oh imbram...wonderful......no woman would compare you to another, you are truly unique....Niah
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Fellsman
This is so beautifully said
And sure to turn any woman's head...aware3
And Hey there swade777, How r you ? I have been out of the loop for awhile.