Falling Tears

Tears are falling like the summer rain
Another break up, another dose of pain
Two lovers once they were but not today
Her day was blue but now its grey
Whatever happened she cannot tell
She never saw it coming, never heard the bell

But for many of us the same we knew
Something coming out of the blue
And it's true what they say, just give it time
And the painful memories will slowly fade
Then one day you'll feel once more
When the circle of love will knock at your door


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agoodguy2have suffolk, Virginia USA
Wed Jul 21, 2010 2:28 PM CST
dude! great write! painfully positive! wow.

caroljoyce Manchester, Greater Manchester, England UK
Thu Jul 22, 2010 12:37 PM CST
Very nice poem, well done.

Redex Wansbeck, Northumberland, England UK
Thu Jul 22, 2010 12:40 PM CST
Lovely true words, and a circle of love lies in here too teddybear
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Posted: Mar 2011
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under previous name serpico12

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Comments (3)

SCatlyn
Another beautiful poem... and love the hope in "once more, when the circle of love will knock at your door" thumbs up teddybear
christian22
hi there scatlyn, thank you my friend, always you are so regular with the comments...very much appreciated..wave
christian22
hi goodguy, thank you for that comment, and yes sometimes it flows like that, the mood..


thank you carol, always like your comments..


thank you also redex, for your thoughts on this one too...appreciate you all...
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