Lips

Lips that hold honey
lips that hold softness
doorway to passionate
intimate embrace

Sweetest of lover's kiss
starting with puppy love
going much deeper
hand into glove

Deeper the kisses
more sweet the moment
passion bursts open
as heavy cloud bursts


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Ladybee42 Waterford, Waterford Ireland
Wed Aug 18, 2010 10:27 AM CST
kisses do say and do a lot.wine
thumbs up bouquet bouquet


Ladyjj east, Norfolk, England UK
Wed Aug 18, 2010 4:08 PM CST
Sweet kisses are indeed made of this...lovely write Serpico
thumbs up
Ljj cool angel
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Posted: Mar 2011
About this poem:
Dedicated to my one and only Debra:

previously written under my serpico12

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Comments (14)

christian22
hi ladybee, thanks for your viewing and reply, yes they do just as you write, better than the eskimo way i think...
christian22
hi ladyjj, thank you for your thoughts too, appreciate your comments..
SCatlyn
Some very sweet lips there - lol lips
Lovely poem as lovely as the kisses(...and passionate, too)
Very nice dedication! rose rose
boyshchrm6
Some pretty heavy spit-swapping going on there christian,but said very passionately. TY angel thumbs up grin
christian22
hi there scatlyn, well your description is spot on...i love your icons too...and love the comments also..lips kiss love the warm response
christian22
hi boyschrm6 yes you too are so right, beats the eskimo way for sure..thumbs up
Redex
Is it true then are kisses sweeter than wine??? I sense a romance??? Lovely poem
christian22
hi redex..interesting question..well dont know if kisses are sweeter, but i much prefer them to the wine..rolling on the floor laughing thanks for the comments..and yes to your question on romance...poem on debra...
Redex
cheering just wonderful love appears catching, I have my net readylaugh seriously glad to hear.
thesunandthesea
I....I would like to get deeeeeeeeeeper kisses too..blushing blushing blushing lol In my country, (my culture) we dont do kiss often...and we kiss only our husband...LOL (so where is my husband?) rolling on the floor laughing

Maybe I'm a lil bit old-fashioned.. nerd a new generation (teenagers) do kiss a lot... lol grin but I dont want to spoil my kiss (in real) so I spoil here (in internet lol)blushing blushing blushing

N' I dont drink...so whenever you wanna drink (a wine) just gimme a kiss instead, that d be nice.. ((I tell my future husband, not you Christian Ok.. lol))

(((me blushhhhh))) lololol blushing blushing blushing

lips lips lips lips lips how many kisses would be enough for this such a really sweeet poem? Muahx
lips
christian22
hi redex, thanks again for the reply, spring has come early i guess, glad you have someone with you too..best wishes for the both of you..wine
christian22
hi sunandthesea, well somewhere out there is a husband i would imagine, and he would love to get your affection, so old fashioned is really nice way to do it..
and try to hide your blushes sunandsea or some people will tease you about that, people do that ....
well how many kisses you ask for the poem, tell you what you save them for your husband, and a you can put a smile or a thumbs up on the poem, that will do it just fine..thanks for your comment by the way..
thesunandthesea
lips lips lips lips lips lips lips lips lips lips lips lips


OOOPs kiss flood! Hope you can swim! LOL rolling on the floor laughing
christian22
hi sunandthesea, yes oops..lol, but i take it as your compliment on the poem..thank you
your husband when he comes will have to learn to swim i guessrolling on the floor laughing
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