Rebuke

Did you hear little,
That you called someone?
Can you guess
That what you waiting for?
Can you feel ... I'm sorry, it was a rebuke,
Because you even nenojaut
How much love.
Just a little lacks,
that it would not.
Just a little lacks,
That did not come.
Just a little, little,
a little lacking.
Your heat, the people
called love.
And yet, hearing or
My innocent criticism:
Did you hear little,
That you called someone?
Can you guess
that what you waiting for?
Can you feel
how much someone loves you, and trying to turn this moment of wonder.
And yet ...
It is a rebuke.
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Posted: Mar 2011

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