by Unknown
Mar 2011 269 Views 2 comments
SOS
Ships are like people
sailing life's ocean
battling the elements
day by day
Crossing smooth
crossing rough
sometimes weak
sometimes tough
overwhelmed by it all
life more than a squall
Can we spot
the SOS people send?
Can we see
the rockets
hit the air,
sail close by them
reach a hand out
save our soul
Comments
freeatlast64847 Lanagan, Missouri USA
Sun Sep 12, 2010 4:32 PM WET
Well said!
SCatlyn OKC, Oklahoma USA
Mon Feb 14, 2011 2:41 PM WET
Wonderful, sympathetic, caring poem - "Can we spot, the SOS people send....Reach a hand out, save our soul"
serpico12 cardiff, Mid Glamorgan, Wales UK
Mon Feb 14, 2011 5:00 PM WET
Thanks freeatlast, appreciate your input...again cheers..
Hey thank you so much scatlyn, catching the heart of the poem, as you seem to do so much, grateful for your kind and thoughtful words...best wishes this valentines day..
sailing life's ocean
battling the elements
day by day
Crossing smooth
crossing rough
sometimes weak
sometimes tough
overwhelmed by it all
life more than a squall
Can we spot
the SOS people send?
Can we see
the rockets
hit the air,
sail close by them
reach a hand out
save our soul
Comments
freeatlast64847 Lanagan, Missouri USA
Sun Sep 12, 2010 4:32 PM WET
Well said!
SCatlyn OKC, Oklahoma USA
Mon Feb 14, 2011 2:41 PM WET
Wonderful, sympathetic, caring poem - "Can we spot, the SOS people send....Reach a hand out, save our soul"
serpico12 cardiff, Mid Glamorgan, Wales UK
Mon Feb 14, 2011 5:00 PM WET
Thanks freeatlast, appreciate your input...again cheers..
Hey thank you so much scatlyn, catching the heart of the poem, as you seem to do so much, grateful for your kind and thoughtful words...best wishes this valentines day..
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Posted: Mar 2011
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Comments (2)
Yeah sometimes, smooth, rough, weak, tough... We send the SOS EVERY TIME... some ppl see it sometimes, and some ppl never see it. But only true friends and ppl that loves us from their heart see the sign EVERY TIME.
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Thank you for posting Mr. Christian! \(^_*)/
glad you liked the poem..and thank you for your kind write