Path of the Wind

Clouds are blown by the wind unseen
Trees feel its caress of her leaves
Whistling through on a summer day
Creating a soft cool breeze

Watch her play on this earthly ball
As she covers the sea and land
Oceans deep feel her presence there
As she sweeps with a mighty hand

Blow big wind send the sailboat home
Fill the sails with breath from above
Though the wind can be often stormy
on a sea once still like a dove

Blow wind blow all around the world
Places I have never seen
As you pass over me I just wonder
Where in this world have you been

Whisper into my world
Tell me what you have seen
So I can fly on the eagle's wing
To places where you have been.


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Redex Wansbeck, Northumberland, England UK
Wed Jul 21, 2010 2:06 PM WET
Just wonderful, took my breath away with the gust.
What a lovely poem
teddybear

hi and thank you redex..what a neat response, gives my poem some meaning for you..

sophiasummer auckland, Auckland New Zealand
Wed Jul 21, 2010 2:11 PM WET
Whisper into my world
Tell me what you have seen
So i can fly on the eagles wing
To places where you have been.

Wow!
lifted my feet,then rose....
Mighty!

Where in this world have you been

SS

hi sophia thanks for your comments on this one too..

Gashly Amish Hell, Ohio USA
Wed Jul 21, 2010 2:24 PM WET
very interesting and indeed inspiring. cheers!

hi gashly, thank you too for leaving a kind postive thought

agoodguy2have suffolk, Virginia USA
Wed Jul 21, 2010 9:08 PM WET
serpico is full of wind, the good kind that brings growing weather and clearing skies, thanks man.

hi goodguy and appreciate your thoughts on this one..

Happygolucky4u Treasure Coast, Florida USA
Wed Jul 21, 2010 9:16 PM WET
It is truely lovely. I do love a good wind "Trees feel its caress of her leaves"
bouquet

hi happygolucky, thank you too..appreciate it..

trurorob Alicante, Valenciana Spain
Wed Jul 21, 2010 9:21 PM WET
very enjoyable
rob


thanks rob, for viewing and the comment..
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Comments (16)

Redex
Still found it breathtaking too.
jazzy75
A fortunate wind for sure!!! Beautifully saidcheers
christian22
hi redex and thank you again for that second look, it means a lot when a poem is seen a second time around..
christian22
hi and thanks jazzy, appreciate your thoughts too..
SCatlyn
This is wonderful!!
I enjoyed reading it several times! thumbs up happy place rose
christian22
hey scatlyn wow to read it again that always makes a writer think that the poem has some good quality,like some others, who did the same as you..thank you very much scatlyn.angel wave
Odette67
Reminds me of a saying I had when I was young, when my kids were driving me crazy, I would say, Oh, for the wings of a dove, so I can fly away.

Lovely poem, draws me in.


Christina
Noelle67
very musical like a flute song but is home where the heart is or is it another harbour? that is a entirely new orchestra.
christian22
hi and thanks for that remark, yes peace and quiet is a must, thanks for viewing.wave
christian22
thanks for your comments, have not thought on that theme..as yet...
gypsyheart
I just love the wind and your poem took my imagination on eagles wings into a dreamers world.Very beautiful poem christian22bouquet
christian22
hi gypsyheart thank you glad the words were that good for you to ponder on, thanks again.
QuietStormF
Simply beuatiful.. and exceptionally well written! A pleasure to read this one! Thank-you..wine bouquet teddybear
christian22
hi quietstorm, hey thank you for that, glad you like this one..
niah9
I admit Christian to be spellbound watching a powerful wind stir up the waves that crash on the shore, something on the west coast we are used too. Maybe reminds me of the west of Wales...but more than anything, I love to watch a gentle breeze, stir leaves or trees in its path.....lovely poem Christian..Niahdancing teddybear
christian22
hi niah9 that sounds really great to sit and watch the ocean, its one of my favourite things..thanks again for your comments and sharing..
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