Clouds are blown by the wind unseen
Trees feel its caress of her leaves
Whistling through on a summer day
Creating a soft cool breeze
Watch her play on this earthly ball
As she covers the sea and land
Oceans deep feel her presence there
As she sweeps with a mighty hand
Blow big wind send the sailboat home
Fill the sails with breath from above
Though the wind can be often stormy
on a sea once still like a dove
Blow wind blow all around the world
Places I have never seen
As you pass over me I just wonder
Where in this world have you been
Whisper into my world
Tell me what you have seen
So I can fly on the eagle's wing
To places where you have been.
Comments
Redex Wansbeck, Northumberland, England UK
Wed Jul 21, 2010 2:06 PM WET
Just wonderful, took my breath away with the gust.
What a lovely poem hi and thank you redex..what a neat response, gives my poem some meaning for you..
sophiasummer auckland, Auckland New Zealand
Wed Jul 21, 2010 2:11 PM WET
Whisper into my world
Tell me what you have seen
So i can fly on the eagles wing
To places where you have been.Wow!
lifted my feet,then rose....
Mighty!Where in this world have you beenSShi sophia thanks for your comments on this one too..
Gashly Amish Hell, Ohio USA
Wed Jul 21, 2010 2:24 PM WET
very interesting and indeed inspiring. cheers! hi gashly, thank you too for leaving a kind postive thought
agoodguy2have suffolk, Virginia USA
Wed Jul 21, 2010 9:08 PM WET
serpico is full of wind, the good kind that brings growing weather and clearing skies, thanks man. hi goodguy and appreciate your thoughts on this one..
Happygolucky4u Treasure Coast, Florida USA
Wed Jul 21, 2010 9:16 PM WET
It is truely lovely. I do love a good wind "Trees feel its caress of her leaves" hi happygolucky, thank you too..appreciate it..
trurorob Alicante, Valenciana Spain
Wed Jul 21, 2010 9:21 PM WET
very enjoyable
robthanks rob, for viewing and the comment..
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I enjoyed reading it several times!
Lovely poem, draws me in.
Christina