an echo is a lonely thing its just a mirror to another its not an answer its a repeat its attractive to the victim who thinks its an agreement but its just fake an echo is fine in the outdoors where nature makes it so as it bounces off and disappears and has no power but an echo to the heart or soul an illusion of self and on purpose to betray is a lie with a thief behind it predator and prey its not pretty or real and in time is found to be nothing- as that is all it is sad thing the echo empty soul empty heart delivering emptiness tearing someone real apart;
WINHA, this analogy of sound to past is a lament of strong words. i respectfully disagree that memories echos are "a thief behind it predator and prey", though the perception is understood. It is, i think, how the memory is viewed by us, that makes it have power to keep us in the past, as opposed to being a warm memory of a time past, or perhaps a reminder of a lesson, hard learned. Nice poem. ;-)
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predator and prey", though the perception is understood. It is, i think, how the memory is viewed by us, that makes it have power to keep us in the past, as opposed to being a warm memory of a time past, or perhaps a reminder of a lesson, hard learned. Nice poem. ;-)
...Nice one.