i wish..

i wish you could have seen the tears in my eyes
i wish you could have felt my heart breaking
i wish you would have cared
i wish you were there for me
i wish you would have tried
i wish you could see the hurt in my eyes

look what you'v done now sweetie does this make you happy?

i wish you would have found me
i wish you would have just let me bleed
i wish you would have saved me
oh hunny even you cant save me now its too late
sorry doesnt work anymore

i wish we could start over in a real world
i wish we could have been happy. but we werent
oh hun i wish we were

i wish you would have loved me
i wish we could have done this
i wish it was easier
i wish we didnt hurt
i wish u didnt hate me

oh sweetie i know you hate me but i dont hate you
i forgive you
i wish i wouldnt have fallen
i wish it wasnt to late.


i wish you could save me oh sweetie save me
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Posted: Jun 2011
About this poem:
something i wrote

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Comments (3)

andrew149
Well my wish it seems was granted...lol....You definitely have a style of your own, a good thing in my book....this one very much in the same vein as the first....I liked it.....Andrew...xxxcool
boyshchrm6
You portray the pain of lost love very well Xienn.
Hope this is not real pain that you have. Such
sorrow passes with time and someone will replace
them...mostly. angel thumbs up hug comfort
Fellsman
Hi Jenn

If wishes were horses, beggars would ride... a plaintive and heartfelt cry from the heart... A nice write.

Bill (Fellsman).
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