surreal

by virgosignSt. Julians, Majjistral, Malta

Oct 2009 956 Views 10 comments

surreal...

eyes closed,
and peaceful snoring,

brain is active
in a dream.

living surreal,
jumping, flying,
understanding animal talk.

incredible feats
with no defeats,
ofcourse there is no dying.

for if you fall
you're jolted up.
saved from the ordeal.

heart thumping,
brow sweating.
momentarily disoriented.

realisation !
thank God.
thank you God - it was a dream.

~ ~ ~ ~ ~

Posted: Oct 2009

About this poem:

it must have happenned to all of us at some point in our dreamy world.
hugs xx virgosign

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Comments (10)

andrew149Southbourne, nr.Bournemouth, Dorset, England UKOct 31, 2009

thankyou for a good read, I enjoyed this one......andrew

boyshchrm6barrie, Ontario CanadaOct 31, 2009

Thanks virgosign.Reminds me of the times I was a superhero for
a few hours at least.lol

jazzy75Houston, Texas USAOct 31, 2009

virgosign - enjoyable read. thank you for sharing :-)

RedexNorthumberland, England UKOct 31, 2009

I do know what you mean, but boyshchrm6 has just made me laugh with his comment, says it all thankyou for that share

aware3navarre, Florida USAOct 31, 2009

From 1 virgo to another, I really enjoyed this poem, n identified with the truth of it, n in ur last line where u say Thank God it was a dream- I have found that line works also even when we know it isn't ! Thanks 4 sharing ! aware3

gypsyheartSouth coast of KwaZulu Natal, KwaZulu-Natal South AfricaOct 31, 2009

Oh yes Thank God its only a dream-i like your poem virgosign.Thanks for sharing