a sunset unshared

by virgosignSt. Julians, Majjistral, Malta

May 2011 1,426 Views 21 comments

a sunset unshared ...

I was drowning in the golden glow of the dying day,
One evening in the early days of May.
I was alone taking in this wonderous sight.
Pity, for there was enough to share this beautiful disk's dimming light.
A ray.
One ray can kill the blackest night and lifts the soul.
Such a delight.

~ ~ ~ ~ ~

Posted: May 2011

About this poem:

dedicated to all CS posting poets.
with love. Virgosign

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Comments (21)

jerseygirl50petersburg, Virginia USAMay 5, 2011

Dearest Virgosign,
I'm speachless

what a beautifull

you are.
this was amazing!!1

...JG..

niah9Auckland, New ZealandMay 5, 2011

Shows your joy and love of a sunset virgosign....enjoyed the beauty of your poem.....Niah

PinkpoetressClarksburg, West Virginia USAMay 5, 2011

Virgosign,
How sweet of you. Your poem was lovely. Thank you.

virgosignOPSt. Julians, Majjistral MaltaMay 5, 2011

thank you JG for your lovely comment and support. xx

virgosignOPSt. Julians, Majjistral MaltaMay 6, 2011

niah. your comment appreciated.
there's another beautiful 'sunset' around, so I med to edit title
:)

Ladefoss23Langen, Hessen GermanyMay 6, 2011

aww. I had read that in a book of poems called reflections.. didnt know you wrote the book

virgosignOPSt. Julians, Majjistral MaltaMay 6, 2011

ladefoss
you could not have read my poem in any book but thank you for reading it and your comment. i have edited the title now since there is a beautiful 'sunset' by fellsman already listed.
peace

gnj4uBoston, Massachusetts USAMay 6, 2011

Hi, virgosign,
One ray can kill the blackest night and lifts the soul. Thanks for sharing your poem's ray with us! My soul is lifted.

virgosignOPSt. Julians, Majjistral MaltaMay 7, 2011

GNJ

thank you.

virgosignOPSt. Julians, Majjistral MaltaMay 7, 2011

@ Pink
thank you for being so positive.

virgosignOPSt. Julians, Majjistral MaltaMay 8, 2011

Earl.
you are too kind. thank you.

flamelilyGuarda, Viana do Castelo PortugalJun 10, 2011

beautiful poem

virgosignOPSt. Julians, Majjistral MaltaJun 12, 2011

glad you like it flamelily. thank you.

RedexNorthumberland, England UKJun 12, 2011

Just lovely words and so true for those who look,

virgosignOPSt. Julians, Majjistral MaltaJun 13, 2011

red. as always very supporting. thanks.

RunawayDreamsPalm Bay, Florida USAJan 2, 2012

Very Beautiful!! Thank you!

virgosignOPSt. Julians, Majjistral MaltaJan 3, 2012

thank you for this bump Runaway. one of my own favourites I must say. All the best for 2012

caring055St.Julians, Majjistral MaltaMay 3, 2013

Love this poem.

Your next should be,, a sunset shared

ladyjewelDurban, KwaZulu-Natal South AfricaMay 3, 2013

There is so much beauty around us and sometimes we alone see the wonders of nature,
And yes to be able to share something so precious would be wonderful

I felt this poem, thank you xx

virgosignOPSt. Julians, Majjistral MaltaMay 4, 2013

Thank you R. You never know.

caring055St.Julians, Majjistral MaltaMay 4, 2013

Will keep on hoping and waiting for it. XX

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