by socrates44San Fernando, Trinidad and Tobago
Oct 2013 1,028 Views 7 comments
Rain
rain is falling on the window pane
with a very pleasant refrain
that is soothing to my brain
it does not leave a stain
so it's not a pain
it stopped it's reign
once again
there's no
rain
with a very pleasant refrain
that is soothing to my brain
it does not leave a stain
so it's not a pain
it stopped it's reign
once again
there's no
rain
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Oct 2013
About this poem:
Just another rain poem - a sister toRedex's "The Sky Cries"
My second nonet. I used the centre format this time.
My first was "Old Age".
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Comments (7)
the rain seems a powerful mantra to pain,
so soothing! do doubt, an instrument of
peace
ty for your beautiful sharing, and I really
like how the visual on the poem descends or
ends in a 'no rain' (drop)
Thank you for your comment.
I like how you describe the sound of the rain as a mantra.
I also like the style of your comments - crisp and incisive, and directed to some specific aspect of the content.
I used the centre format for this nonet since it looks like a drop(inverted) as you noted - a raindrop.
Have a wonderful day!
Thanks for your comment. I am glad you liked your sister.
You can listen to her soothing sound indoors in comfort without getting drenched outdoors.
Have a nice day!
Thank you for your comment. I am glad that you enjoy the rain in either mood but I hope that most of the time it is comforting to you.
Have a great day!