Blackbirds In The Rain

blackbirds in the rain
walking among the fallen leaves
under the old mango tree
with dripping leaves
bathing the grass below
blackbirds diligently lifting
the rain soaked fallen leaves
peering underneath for insects
and worms
flushed out
by the drizzling rain
pausing to gulp one down
then scooting off again
searching for more

sitting under the shed
with raindrops playing their music
on the galvanised sheet roof
with a beat
that resonates
within my inner being
putting me in a trance
connecting me to the rain
and the puddles on the ground
with the raindrops
gently tapping the water's surface
creating rings that collide
with one another
disrupting their individual shapes
creating a dynamic new pattern
reflecting their unity
and bubbling with energy
in the drizzling rain

O what a deep feeling
of peacefulness and serenity
with the rain
the dripping leaves
and the puddles
serenading my spirit
with the eternal song of Nature
and merging it into the
Unity Of All Things
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Nov 2014
About this poem:
It was raining today. There was a constant drizzle for hours. I sat in a shed attached to the house, watching the blackbirds in action in the rain, searching for their food. The constant rhythmic sound of the rain on the galvanised sheet roof of the shed and the gentle drama playing out in the backyard with the blackbirds was a spiritual experience for me connecting me with Nature and the unity of all things as mentioned in the last verse.

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candykid
Nice descriptive lines Socrates.
ImagineLove
Oh Socrates if I close my eyes I can be there with you listening to all the images you have so skillfully painted in your words! I love the rain and those sounds are so full of peace and serenity! I love this so much!

serenading my spirit
with the eternal song of Nature
and merging it into the
Unity Of All Things



Always with you in spirit! hug purple heart
avias
"Blackbirds..rain,dripping leaves;eternal song of Nature" ...loving that feeling that comes with the damp, rainy day...where you sit,watch & listen. Wonderful mood and picture.handshake
Poetnumber1
A descriptive enjoyable piece Socrates. Very much enjoyed. I picture each image succinctly as it developed. A pleasure to read your presentation of black birds in the rain this morn. Regards
WILDANDREADY
SOCRATES; I ENJOYED THIS ONE! NO ANIMAL SHOULD GO HUNGRY!HOPE THEY FOUND SOME REAL GOODIES!dancing TRAVIS
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candykid
Nice to hear from you.
Thank you for your kind comment.
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Jade
Thanks for your lovely comment.
I must confess, though, I did not write this poem. It wrote itself. I only recorded the words as they came to me.
I was in a sort of trance, watching the birds feeding in the rain and hearing the rhythmic sound of the raindrops on the roof.
Take Care, my dearest friend!
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avias.
Thanks for your beautiful comment.
I am happy to know that you enjoy the wonderful mood and feeling created by a rainy day.
It puts one in tune with Nature in a very special way.
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Poetnumber1
Thanks for your kind comment.
I am glad you enjoyed the piece.
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Travis
Thanks for your comment. I am glad you enjoyed the piece.
I am sure they fed themselves well. They seemed to be having a good time darting around in the rain.
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