I WOULD WRITE A POEM HERE, BUT I THINK IT WOULD BE LOST, LOST, AMONGST THE MIRYAD OF WORDS, LOST, LIKE A TEAR DROP IN THE SEA, LOST, LIKE A CANDLE BEFORE THE SUN, WHO WOULD SEE THIS WORK? WHO WOULD APPLAUD THIS PIECE THAT I ALONE HAVE PENNED? WOULD YOU? MAYBE I SHALL REFRAIN FROM THIS, MAYBE I SHALL REST MY PEN AND SAVE THIS FUTILE ACT, DO I WRITE THIS FOR YOU? OR FOR MYSELF? I CAN'T BE SURE, NEVER THE LESS IT IS DONE. SO THIS PIECE OF ME HAS FALLEN TO THE PAGE WHETHER UNWARENTED OR NOT IT IS HERE, MY AIM IS WELL MET AS THESE WORDS RUN DRY. AT FIRST I THOUGHT THIS WAS FOR ME BUT NOW I THINK IT'S YOURS!
RAEL PENNED THESE WORDS.
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Posted: Jun 2011
About this poem:
I WROTE THIS TO FILL THE EMPTY SPACE WHERE A POEM NEEDED TO BE.
RAEL - excellent work...welcome to poets corner. i look forward to reading more of your writing
Odette67Penrith, Cumbria, England UKJun 13, 2011
DO I WRITE THIS FOR YOU? OR FOR MYSELF?
Speaking for myself, I wrote poems just for myself for many years, till I got a computer 8 yr ago, I find poetry is very good for the soul, keep writing, I think you are quite good.
RAEL266OPLIVERPOOL, Merseyside, England UKJun 14, 2011
TO ALL THANK YOU FOR YOUR COMMENTS.I CANT HELP WRITING POETRY, IT JUST HAS TO GET OUT SOME TIMES. THE FLOW OF SO MANY ARE LOST WHILE DRIVING THE CAR OR WHILE WORKING
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OR FOR MYSELF?
Speaking for myself, I wrote poems just for myself for many years, till I got a computer 8 yr ago, I find poetry is very good for the soul, keep writing, I think you are quite good.
THERE WILL BE MORE!
RAEL.