The pain begins to wake me, My nightmare starts to shake me I find demons trying break me And day by day I suffer in silence, Screaming inside but no one knows What I continue to hide, the pressure, the pain, and yet there's no one but myself to blame Is there anyone I could tell? Would they scream or yell? From the looks on their faces, I could never tell, they steal and lie Yet I'm the one who defies them, With secrets, they search for but never find.
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Posted: Jun 2011
About this poem:
something i wrote just today i hope you like it :]
steve1223adelaide, South Australia AustraliaJun 22, 2011
secrets? what secrets?
swade777Grants Pass Area, Oregon USAJun 23, 2011
The 'vibes' I get from your writings is that you're looking for something.... for someone... to make your life more sense-able to yourself. There's a lot of depression in this piece. I hope you're open to the friendships that are abundantly available to you from this terrific family of poets corner!! It's been great to see you here so consistently and I hope to see more of your work. By the way, I like the new profile photo!!
RedexNorthumberland, England UKJun 23, 2011
I will second swade lots of people here will give you a cuddle till those secrets unravel, I'v had many and its a place I visit now. I liked the poem too, dark, sad, but good
xjennxoxOPportland, Oregon USAJun 23, 2011
thank you everyone :] im glad that u like my writings it all cam from my heart
Comments (6)
I liked the poem too, dark, sad, but good
In this world there are many secret keepers. You are not alone