Perfect person

body in the grip of tearing pain,
Remember to breath, count, mind closed in for those few seconds.

Heavy, full feeling, pain and pressure, and suddenly..

You slide out and the pain is gone,
A small body is placed on my chest, wet and warm,
I look down and there is a cloud of soft hair,
A face and body of an angel with the smallest hands,
You move and seem to curl up into me and my heart swells.

You are the perfect person, and the wonder is you were made
Inside me.

You are MY perfect person and i will protect you always,
My gift.
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: May 2013
About this poem:
My children are all my perfect people.

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Lady J.
(The air so fresh the day is cool
Heart is satisfied n the Soul is high.)

"From me"
_______________________

You are My perfect person and I will protect you alway.thumbs up

Precious feelling and Valuable word.:: tip hat rose
B happy my Sweet Friend.bouquet hug kiss
Arteee
Beautiful ladyjewel.. Children are our angels a true gift of love
angel teddybear thumbs up
mariespoodles
You took me on a journey back to memory lane. O God how you forget that pain after such a wonderful gift!! My heart fills up too when I think about my two little gifts who are now 32 and 15 yrs old. Gifts for the heart!!! heart beating gift heart beating gift
Odette67
A delightful poem Ladyjewel, one we Mothers can identify with so well. hug purple heart
timotie
Lady J.
The 1st Comment is mine.
My sweet Friend.hug bouquet
beautifulyou
'A small body is placed on my chest, wet and warm,
I look down and there is a cloud of soft hair,
A face and body of an angel..'


Perfectly precious ladyjewel,
the whole write really,
the sweetest of sharing.

Ty teddybear
darkhorse555
a gift of perfection nicely pennedangel
ladyjewel
teddybear thank you ladies, i know the moms would feel thishug hug

And liam and timotie thank you so much hug hug

Smiles, i spoke to my daughter today love
ladyjewel
Cafeblushing teddybear
timotie
Lady J.
Welcome.
Good News you
Talked to your
Daughterbouquet

Love n Smile for Her.hug
ladyjewel
Thank you sweet timotie for the message before
and yes it was lovely, i miss my childrenkiss teddybear lips
I am lucky to be your friend teddybear
timotie
Lady J.
I really impressed by
Your Comment.tip hat rose

I wish you
Bright and Happy
Future for your Childerns.teddybear

hug bouquet hug bouquet
Yankee4you
As well as they should be. angel cool
cherryreggae
Beautiful write ladyjewel...you capture the beauty & blessing of a child,,,, thankyou 4 sharing very touching writeteddybear heart beating teddybear
diana_1
yes, the pain fades but the treasure it brought is precious, lovely ladyjewel, that is indeed perfect person and a perfect love
fjamesj9701
Wonderful poetry LJ beauty in every word...jessewine
paloma66
They are the essence of our being,we go through pain to bring out these precious bundles of joy,we live for them,we watch them grow.What an awesome creation of god for a mother a child nurtured with her blood living inside her near to her heart,it is no wonder a child means a lot to a mother.Beautic depiction Jewel.Touched my heart.purple heart angel bouquet
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