I'd Look accross the river to horral out a shout To the Boat man that had no sight He knew where he was going But i was afraid for his life I shouted,can you hear me? No he said,get out of my sight. Why do you say that?I said" Beacause you are always shouting at me Thinking i have no where to go I know my way on this river In Boats i know where i go But you Dear don't see where you are going You only see me. And you have no where to go. You see i am floating down the River away from you. You are stranded in your Prison Chained to the Earth like it's soil But me Dear i know where i am going To the edge of the Horizon Were no one can be with me Take your Bloody time Dear the soil will wash away And we will meet at the Horizon And i will be heading out to sea You see Dear the Sea for me is an escape From the World of Hipocricy I can't wait to meet at the Horizon So we can both flee out to sea. You never thought i wanted you But you were wrong in what you hear You listen to your own voice And you could never hear me But i will always Love you So come to me my Dear.
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Posted: Jun 2011
About this poem:
I was just sitting here thinking about a River and a Love story filled my mind.Love the Ocean.Dreamtime i guess.
Take your Bloody time Dear the soil will wash away And we will meet at the Horizon And i will be heading out to sea You see Dear the Sea for me is an escape From the World of Hipocricy
@Odette67. Thankyou so much for your comment.My First Published Poem. Have a great Day.
DaBomb72Mantova, Lombardy ItalyJun 25, 2011
Touchable, passionate and disturbing poem ! Congrats Barbara ! May this could be the first in a much longer path on Poetry !
Odette67Penrith, Cumbria, England UKJun 25, 2011
If this is your first poem, well done, I never wrote a poem in my life till I was 57 yrs old.
Country47-, Oslo NorwayJun 25, 2011
storm in the sea will not be kindly let be. see the sun rise in peace and dont not freeze, do not sejle in the sea give them a smile and say it's me and stop in time, so give them a smile thanks for the mile remember there is only one of you country 47
Thankyou Bill.I am really enjoying reading all the poetry. I am glad to be here.
JELLYWILLYDIEPPE, Normandie FranceJun 25, 2011
this poem has a special ring for me as i love rivers-a deep thing in my mind................................. being also into astrology i would say these words are typical of a sagittarius-longing for horizon and love far away...... a quite healthy view on love and life....................... hail Irish lyricism!!!!!!
Aw this is lovely as well, I really love what you have done with the words, you painted them just so, they project many images into my Mind. Thank You Blue. ;-}
Comments (16)
And we will meet at the Horizon
And i will be heading out to sea
You see Dear the Sea for me is an escape
From the World of Hipocricy
Very good.
Thankyou so much for your comment.My First Published Poem.
Have a great Day.
kindly let be. see the sun rise in peace
and dont not freeze, do not sejle in the sea
give them a smile and say it's me
and stop in time, so give them a smile
thanks for the mile
remember
there is only one of you
country 47
Thankyou for your comment.
There was a Poet living and Breathing inside of you.
You are a deep writer.
Thankyou for your kind words.
You made my day.
Thankyou for your very kind comment.Enjoy your Tea.
An impressive debut poem, I hope you enjoy being part of Poetry Corner.
Best wishes
Fellsman (Bill).
Thankyou Bill.I am really enjoying reading all the poetry.
I am glad to be here.
in my mind.................................
being also into astrology i would say these words are typical
of a sagittarius-longing for horizon and love far away......
a quite healthy view on love and life.......................
hail Irish lyricism!!!!!!
;-}