'Accross The River'

'Accross The River'

I'd Look accross the river to horral out a shout
To the Boat man that had no sight
He knew where he was going
But i was afraid for his life
I shouted,can you hear me?
No he said,get out of my sight.
Why do you say that?I said"
Beacause you are always shouting at me
Thinking i have no where to go
I know my way on this river
In Boats i know where i go
But you Dear don't see where you are going
You only see me.
And you have no where to go.
You see i am floating down the River away from you.
You are stranded in your Prison
Chained to the Earth like it's soil
But me Dear i know where i am going
To the edge of the Horizon
Were no one can be with me
Take your Bloody time Dear the soil will wash away
And we will meet at the Horizon
And i will be heading out to sea
You see Dear the Sea for me is an escape
From the World of Hipocricy
I can't wait to meet at the Horizon
So we can both flee out to sea.
You never thought i wanted you
But you were wrong in what you hear
You listen to your own voice
And you could never hear me
But i will always Love you
So come to me my Dear.
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Posted: Jun 2011
About this poem:
I was just sitting here thinking about a River and a Love story filled my mind.Love the Ocean.Dreamtime i guess.

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Odette67
Take your Bloody time Dear the soil will wash away
And we will meet at the Horizon
And i will be heading out to sea
You see Dear the Sea for me is an escape
From the World of Hipocricy


Very good.handshake
BlueOcean2011
@Odette67.
Thankyou so much for your comment.My First Published Poem.
Have a great Day.handshake
DaBomb72
Touchable, passionate and disturbing poem ! Congrats Barbara !handshake May this could be the first in a much longer path on Poetry !bouquet
Odette67
If this is your first poem, well done, I never wrote a poem in my life till I was 57 yrs old.applause
Country47
storm in the sea will not be
kindly let be. see the sun rise in peace
and dont not freeze, do not sejle in the sea
give them a smile and say it's me
and stop in time, so give them a smile
thanks for the mile
remember
there is only one of you
country 47wine
BlueOcean2011
@Odette67.

Thankyou for your comment.
There was a Poet living and Breathing inside of you.
You are a deep writer.
lordarun
applause write more poems "blue".applause
BlueOcean2011
@Lordarun.

Thankyou for your kind words.
You made my day.wine
Earlgreytea
what a 'rings-true' poem, thanks for sharing...
BlueOcean2011
@Earlsgreytea.

Thankyou for your very kind comment.Enjoy your Tea.laugh
Fellsman
Hi Blueocean

An impressive debut poem, I hope you enjoy being part of Poetry Corner.

Best wishes

Fellsman (Bill). wine
BlueOcean2011
@Fellsman.

Thankyou Bill.I am really enjoying reading all the poetry.
I am glad to be here.
JELLYWILLY
this poem has a special ring for me as i love rivers-a deep thing
in my mind.................................
being also into astrology i would say these words are typical
of a sagittarius-longing for horizon and love far away......
a quite healthy view on love and life.......................
hail Irish lyricism!!!!!!
kickit22
glad you found us your poems are a great addition to an all ready great cast of poets. handshake kickit.
jazzy75
Intriguing poem....that leaves one wanting morethumbs up
Nikogas
Aw this is lovely as well, I really love what you have done with the words, you painted them just so, they project many images into my Mind. Thank You Blue.
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