Clouds in my mind as my clock ticks backwards Too hurt to alter time and set myself free As the tick and the tock clangs all is further away, but the boy who appears as a man gets younger every hour I catch a glimpse in a nightmare of all the pain I have been Others fade away and partners wash their hands Do parents know what they have done to make a childs heart fold? City streets at night time are like a book to shock the world Who knows why the lines become distorted The ladies are out for a drink too many on a Friday night Who knows why the lines become distorted The businessman wants to get lost after the tensions of a day In the bustling cities bodies are being sold The killing fields may be normal and everyday things Norms and values plant the crop that feeds the mayhem A child screams from within the adults going about their day
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Posted: Jul 2011
About this poem:
Just a thought a the end of a long day...............
andrew149Southbourne, nr.Bournemouth, Dorset, England UKJul 14, 2011
I think the penultimate line in this speaks volumes of truth, thankyou for a thought provoking read Gamer, welcome to Poets Corner, I hope you enjoy your stay here.....Kindest regards...Andrew
Gamer41OPLondon, Greater London, England UKJul 14, 2011
Thanks Andrew, will read, ejoy and learn.................
Odette67Penrith, Cumbria, England UKJul 14, 2011
Excellent poem, thank goodness I live in the country.
Gamer41OPLondon, Greater London, England UKJul 14, 2011
Appreciate the feedback odette67. Any critical comment helps me to know where I am going.....cheers
Odette67Penrith, Cumbria, England UKJul 14, 2011
It is a wonderful poem, keep up the good work.
Gamer41OPLondon, Greater London, England UKJul 14, 2011
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