In Heat

by Unknown

Sep 2009 414 Views 9 comments

In the Heat

Author: Unknown

In the heat of the day
nothing moves but my dreams.

For it cannot.

All is quiet around the house
and nothing bad shall disturb me.

For it cannot.

In the quiet heat of today
I will think of no one but you.

For I cannot.

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Posted: Sep 2009

About this poem:

Loving thoughts.

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Comments (9)

HotrodLarrysSt. Joseph, Missouri USASep 8, 2009

Short, sweet, Nice, and Deep meaning!

amahlalaAberdeen, South Dakota USASep 8, 2009

Thank you for sharing this...I could feel the emotion.

Shewolf55OPColumbia, South Carolina USASep 8, 2009

Thank you both. Sometimes in our summer heat I am doing good if I can just think so I'm pleased that I could express the love for others to share.

andrew149Southbourne, nr.Bournemouth, Dorset, England UKSep 8, 2009

good words simply put, well written, thankyou. andrew.......xxx

gypsyheartSouth coast of KwaZulu Natal, KwaZulu-Natal South AfricaSep 9, 2009

Very nice poem once again Shewolf55

Skybowapple valley, California USASep 9, 2009

This is beautiful, I love the minimalism and soft flow. There is great emotion expressed here. Love it!

Shewolf55OPColumbia, South Carolina USASep 9, 2009

Thank you Andrew, Gypsy and Skybow for sharing your thoughts. I appreciate you giving me your time.

boyshchrm6barrie, Ontario CanadaSep 9, 2009

I like the way your poem inicates
such conviction.

Shewolf55OPColumbia, South Carolina USASep 10, 2009

Thank you Boy for feeling the love. I put all of my heart and mind into my love.

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