You Used To Make Me Feel Beautiful

You used to make me feel beautiful,
You used to say I am wonderful,
And now when you have me next to you,
You say I look like a used broom.

You smile to everyone but me,
You praise the look of every girl but mine,
Because I'm already next to you
You let me down...

You do not treat me like a lady at all,
You do not let me feel I'm special,
You said "we are just friends", and wall,
That heavy wall apparted us at once.

I never be "just" somebody to anyone,
I know how unique I am,
I know every word or look of mine
Brings difference and makes a day.

You used to make me feel beautiful
You used to say I'm wonderful,
And now when you have me next to you
You let me down...
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Posted: Sep 2009
About this poem:
This is my first poem in English. It's actually lyric for a song.

I wrote it today.

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Comments (27)

fareaway
applause bouquet teddybear
Sunnn
Thanks for the first comment!
fareaway
your poem is so good i couldnt say anything.. you are a great poet!
Sunnn
Great poet? You gotta kiddin' me! It's my first poem.
gypsyheart
Its a beautiful poem Sunnn-i can almost hear a voice like Norah Jones singing ithug bouquet
Sunnn
Gypsyheart, Thank you!

I heard the music in my head and words just layed down themselves.

If you like it, I will write more. This was a first try.
trurorob
You keep going Sunnn, all poetry comes from the heart and it shows you have a BIG one
Rob
walkerman
beer

wm
Fenix_Oddriscoll
Wow..A poet writes from the heart and captures souls...This indeed is a "Diamond" that has captured this Soul...
Sunnn
Thank you, Rob! It was important for me to receive a comment from you. I like your poetry, although it's complicated for me yet.
Sunnn
Fenix, thank you very much!

Why do not you upload your poems? I bet you have some!
Blizza801
Great Job !!!!
Sunnn
Blizza, THANK YOU!

And I must say, I am impressed by your poetry. I just read one poem of yours and its stunning.
fareaway
i reiterate you are a great poet. and i have read all of your poems now.. hug bouquet teddybear
Sunnn
Faraway,

From a Great Poet to a Great Poet handshake
Sunnn
The guy was good enough to give me inspiration, he was special for me...even if I was not special for him.
antcus
If it really introspect like most poems are, how could anybody in his right senses say you look like a used broom?
Maybe he needs glasses, or maybe he was not worthy of you, although you must have fallen for his praises when they were there.
rambomalta
doh frustrated
Sunnn
antcus
My mirror says me that you are right, he needed glasses rolling on the floor laughing

Thank You my dear friend!
Sunnn
rambomalta

Thank you for reading my writings!

Stop hitting your head against the wall, I need it sane. scold
poetengineer
yes this is the first u write but really it is the top , i like reading it cos it have true feelings , thanks for ur share
Sunnn
Thank you for your comments, poetengineer, and thank you for reading my work.heart wings
boyshchrm6
Very from the heart.
Excellent cool angel
QuietStormF
Good work Sunn ! Love it.. cheering hug teddybear
Sunnn
boyshchrm6

Thank You!
Sunnn
QuietStormF

I am glad you liked it!
aviator1
Too many poems to comment on each one but I can feel the pain, anger and emotion in some of them. Thanks, I read them all and enjoyed them. Maybe I will have ago myself sometime. Ian
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