Wow. Sounds like somebody is overdue for the touch
I enjoyed it---sweet and complete.
Fenix_OddriscollPaola, Xlokk MaltaSep 24, 2009
Sunnn..That is now a part of me...on my pillow..
Let your mind soar on the winds of inspiration...:)
Fenix_OddriscollPaola, Xlokk MaltaSep 24, 2009
"The Pillow"
SunnnOPValletta, Majjistral MaltaSep 24, 2009
Yes, Fenix, Your poem "The Pillow" has similar thoughts with this poem
Fenix_OddriscollPaola, Xlokk MaltaSep 24, 2009
Indeed Sunnn.... The whole theme of inspiration and soaring..on the winds of inspiration...
We strive to be better and excel in what we do. And sometimes when we seek that we can be in a dream like state...We are inspired by others and their deeds and there righting...
Keep it up Sunnn..Many will be inspired...:)
SunnnOPValletta, Majjistral MaltaSep 24, 2009
StressFree, Thank you very much! I am a fan of your poetry, I learn by heart and quote some of your poems. I am happy that you liked it.
SunnnOPValletta, Majjistral MaltaSep 24, 2009
Fenix, Thank you for your constant support!
andrew149Southbourne, nr.Bournemouth, Dorset, England UKSep 24, 2009
good yes, now,stop being lazy and WRITE something, with all due respect.....andrew.....xxx
SunnnOPValletta, Majjistral MaltaSep 24, 2009
Ohh, Andrew!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I am still warming up myself,
first steps, first verses :-)))
I drop here one or two thoughts and wait the comments to see if my writing is understood.
Redrose2009Tabriz, IranSep 24, 2009
I feel it.
rambomaltaMsida, Majjistral MaltaSep 27, 2009
i am already an angel
SunnnOPValletta, Majjistral MaltaSep 27, 2009
StressFree Thank You my dear friend! I am very very very much happy that you liked this poem. I will be writing more.
SunnnOPValletta, Majjistral MaltaSep 27, 2009
Redrose2009
It is so wonderful when you are trying to discribe with words something and other person reads it and can FEEL it!!! Thank You! Thank You! Thank You!
SunnnOPValletta, Majjistral MaltaSep 27, 2009
rambomalta I know that. Saving people, being rescue volunteer is one of angel's duties. I do bear that duty too.
virgosinglegreymouth, West Coast New ZealandSep 27, 2009
you need to be inhaled for the most love within us can be like the air we breath and more for the love of the one
sharkmanmsida, Majjistral MaltaSep 28, 2009
a truly beautiful poem!
SunnnOPValletta, Majjistral MaltaSep 28, 2009
virgosingle
Absolutely!
SunnnOPValletta, Majjistral MaltaSep 28, 2009
sharkman Thank You! I am glad you liked it!
Skybowapple valley, California USASep 28, 2009
Stunning beauty expressed so eloquently in so few words. Bravo!
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I enjoyed it---sweet and complete.
Let your mind soar on the winds of inspiration...:)
The whole theme of inspiration and soaring..on the winds of inspiration...
We strive to be better and excel in what we do. And sometimes when we seek that we can be in a dream like state...We are inspired by others and their deeds and there righting...
Keep it up Sunnn..Many will be inspired...:)
I am still warming up myself,
first steps, first verses :-)))
I drop here one or two thoughts and wait the comments to see if my writing is understood.
Thank You my dear friend!
I am very very very much happy that you liked this poem.
I will be writing more.
It is so wonderful when you are trying to discribe with words something and other person reads it and can FEEL it!!!
Thank You! Thank You! Thank You!
I know that.
Saving people, being rescue volunteer is one of angel's duties.
I do bear that duty too.
Absolutely!
Thank You!
I am glad you liked it!