That Pain

That pain,
It was not even pain
Yet

...Just...
Love touched my throat...
With a blade.
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Posted: Sep 2009
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Comments (38)

fareaway
stunning
thumbs up gift applause
gypsyheart
What a visual of pain-worse than the first one.Few words with a alot of impact-well written Sunnnhug
Sunnn
Too heavy...
antcus
Your association of words to things is fantastic.
Your ability to express in a few words this fantastic reality is beyond belief. Well done!!
Sunnn
Thank you, Anton!
trurorob
Thought provoking for me Sunnn
Rob
andrew149
a lot of verses in a few words, well written, thankyou.......andrew....xxx
rolo777
hi, you seem to be going through some trying times...I'll send you some karma...
Sunnn
fareaway wine
Thank you for the comment! bouquet
Sunnn
gypsyheart kiss Thank you for support when I needed it! bouquet
Sunnn
antcus, Anton wine
You lift me up with such a comment! Thank you very very much! bouquet
Sunnn
Rob!!! Hey, do not take it literary! No suicidal ideas overhere! Not on my page! professor

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Sunnn
Andrew, my dear friend innocent

Thank you very much for all the support I see from you in my first steps in English poetry

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Sunnn
rolo777 beer
No trying times.
If I can write, it means I am happy and feel alive.

Thanks the same, keep the Karma, I have my blessings!

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Fenix_Oddriscoll
Very good Sunnn...This is very true of many...:)applause
StressFree
No pain, no gain? love wine
Sunnn
No Fear - No Fun!

StressFree, I offer you to write one poem ...together.

I like alot some of your expressions, I remember them by heart. Sometimes they go along with mine.
Shall we try? hug
Sunnn
Fenix_Oddriscoll, I am very very very happy that you liked it!
Cant wait to see more of your writings!

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StressFree
A collaboration? Why not.

PM me a stanza---I'll take it from there.

Now!
HotrodLarrys
I dont think we can Find Love, I think it has to find us!

Just words of encouragement,


Today is the first day, of the rest of your Life!

The Choices we Make Today, we live tomorrow!

Today is the Tomorrow, You wondered about "Yesterday"!

Smile It Is Free, and also Contageous!

Live For TODAY!

Example, I dont feel much Love Today, and Kinda Low, But there is a Motorcycle Fund Raiser up the Road and a Poker Run, so Im Getting on the Bike and Have some Fun!lips yay peace
Sunnn
HotrodLarrys
Thank You, My Friend!
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HotrodLarrys
I Gotta Go Ride My Pride! Coming?blushing wink bouquet
Sunnn
On The Way!

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Sunnn
rambomalta
WOHHH
you render me speechless...heart1
maretti09
Your sensitive of words to things is fantastic.
liked..
Sunnn
Thank you maretti09! wave sad flower wave
rambomalta
I like this poem
Sunnn
Thank you!

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freeze
good impact! thumbs up
Sunnn
freeze
My dear friend!

Thank you for!
And thank you for a beautiful e-card I just got from you!

You really inspire me!
Will see you soon for coffee!

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Sunnn
HotrodLarrys
Welcome Back! bouquet bouquet bouquet bouquet
sharkman
blues heheh ........
Sunnn
sharkman
Don't cry! Cheer up! peace
sharkman
ok! dancing dancing dancing head banger
Randy109
Wow,that's a good poem.
Sunnn
How strange...pain passed but poem remain...

We will pass and poems will remain?
jazzy75
Sunnn, brillantly expressed in so few wordscheering
Sunnn
jazzy75
Thank you!
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