Freedom is life and life is freedom,as on the same basis as when we look ourselves in a mirror,we sould not see what reflects but what is beneath our innerself deep inside. Freedom is not a state of mind but a reakity given to us under freewill and desire from high above,from the GREAT ARCHITECT OF THE UNIVERSE. But no greater words could relief our existance Love,Faith and Honour.
Freedom is life and life is freedom,as on the same basis as when we look ourselves in a mirror,we should not see what reflects but what is beneath our innerself deep inside. Freedom is not a state of mind but a reality given to us under freewill and desire from high above,from the GREAT ARCHITECT OF THE UNIVERSE. But no greater words could relief our existance Love,Faith and Honour.
Hi, Janze, With the poet's creative approach, verses I - VI so clearly define what freedom is not; with VII, a celebration of personal freedom. So beautifully written. Each man is born as Freedom’s heir is powerful, with such promise. Thank you for sharing.
Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoSep 13, 2011
A lovely poem Janze,thanks for playing us this tune,the creativity therein shows us light as well as the dark side to freedoms air.
Lavender_BlueBirmingham, West Midlands, England UKSep 13, 2011
Simply brilliant!
LB
RedexNorthumberland, England UKSep 13, 2011
freewill or freedom, other sides of the coin. As always Janze beautiful poem
AyhraAdelaide, South Australia AustraliaSep 13, 2011
Great writing my friend
steve1223adelaide, South Australia AustraliaSep 13, 2011
I believe Janze that you have written an absolute masterpiece here...
FellsmanLake District, Cumbria, England UKSep 14, 2011
One does not have to be shackled and/or incarcerated to be denied freedom:
To be denied freedom of expression can be every bit as soul destroying as being behind bars, which is why no writer should ever be denied the chance to tell the truth (as he/she sees it).
Writers, including poets, have been a bulwark against tyranny for thousands of years, and countless numbers have perished for their beliefs.
A sharp write Janze.
Bill
JanzeOPIndianapolis, Indiana USASep 16, 2011
Freedom is the recognition of our common humanity; the acceptance of the source of that commonness; the determination to value the uniqueness of all human life and to live a life that is void of fear. Fear and Freedom are mutual exclusive lodgers of the soul.
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Freedom is not a state of mind but a reakity given to us under freewill and desire from high above,from the GREAT ARCHITECT OF THE UNIVERSE.
But no greater words could relief our existance Love,Faith and Honour.
Beatiful poem.
The Philosopher
Freedom is not a state of mind but a reality given to us under freewill and desire from high above,from the GREAT ARCHITECT OF THE UNIVERSE.
But no greater words could relief our existance Love,Faith and Honour.
Beatiful poem.
The Philosopher
With the poet's creative approach, verses I - VI so clearly define what freedom is not; with VII, a celebration of personal freedom. So beautifully written. Each man is born as Freedom’s heir is powerful, with such promise. Thank you for sharing.
LB
As always Janze beautiful poem
To be denied freedom of expression can be every bit as soul destroying as being behind bars, which is why no writer should ever be denied the chance to tell the truth (as he/she sees it).
Writers, including poets, have been a bulwark against tyranny for thousands of years, and countless numbers have perished for their beliefs.
A sharp write Janze.
Bill