I In this dizzy age, on Gaia’s strand True goodness raises barely a flutter While the fluffy things of rattle and flare Attract, but go not much further II But good is good and there’s a need For kindness, true words and honour For the earth is only a dreary sphere With lies and doubt and doubter III Yet the golden art, in this vulgar day Brings the cynics and the questions And at every turn, with crooked smile With thorny words, revile IV But goodness bears its own return When the dross is long forgotten So, be true to you and to all other men For at the evening call, what then?
what then indeed friend, I cannot say but the value of raising up the light of nobility,truth and wisdom. both in oneself and others is something I believe strongly in. thus I always feel drawn to your words and through them your love for the earth and its people...elo...
FellsmanLake District, Cumbria, England UKSep 2, 2011
Hi Janze
This is so superbly phrased throughout, in addition you ask the philosopher's question...
A compelling read.
Regards
Bill
cafetwo2010Harford county, Maryland USASep 2, 2011
Penned by a heart of gold..People won't miss heaven on a mere technically..they work themselves in hell by degrees and they do that to fill up the measure of their own wrath, and in so doing prove to God and man that not only are they unfit for heaven, but that they have no desire for it..'At the evening call, they will end up in the company of their own kind..'
Macduff5Newcastle, New South Wales AustraliaSep 3, 2011
Hi Janze,
Great words of wisdom here in a beautifully crafted poem.
Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoSep 3, 2011
Hi Janze,i am always fascinated by the grace and total depths in your writes,i enjoyed the read...theres wisdom in it that we all can learn
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but the value of raising up the light of nobility,truth and wisdom. both in oneself and others is something I believe strongly in. thus I always feel drawn to your words and through them your love for the earth and its people...elo...
This is so superbly phrased throughout, in addition you ask the philosopher's question...
A compelling read.
Regards
Bill
Great words of wisdom here in a beautifully crafted poem.