I Would Give My Freedom Back

I
If freedom was the choice to give,
A rogue the chieftain’s cap;
And then, in time, repeat my lack
I would give my freedom back
II
If freedom was the chance to walk
The streets of my home town;
But always fearful of attack
I would give my freedom back
III
If freedom was to join the sect
And wear the robes of pious men;
And then like wolves, run in a pack
I would give my freedom back
IV
If freedom was to rid myself
Of all that makes a moral man;
And torture men on board and rack
I would give my freedom back
V
If freedom was to kill and destroy
The lives of those I did not know;
And then be knighted for whack and whack
I would give my freedom back
VI
If freedom was to know the truth;
But lie and lie, to keep the form
And then receive a hero's plaque
I would give my freedom back
VII
If freedom was to be immune
From the desparate cries of suffering men
And in those places never crack
I would give my freedom back
VIII
But God, the Almighty is Freedom’s source
And no people hold its exclusive rights
For where Freedom reigns, there is no fear
Each man is born as Freedom’s heir
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Posted: Jun 2015
About this poem:
The word freedom is so often used today, without any real practical indications of its true meaning.

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Comments (5)

trurorob
Very true, lovely write, freedom should have no constraints or restrictions placed upon it or it is not true freedom.
Rob
beautifulyou
Hi Janze. Strong write.
So often what's called freedom is actually the direct manifestation of humanity's inner state of incarceration.

your clear choice thoughout the poem is deeply powerful. Ty for your sharing gift
Janze
Hi Beautiful:

I am humbled by your very generous comment and your incisive insight. Thank you.
Poetnumber1
Powerful piece Janze. So many lines to choose from that really stood out to me. It was a pleasure to read and reread. Salutations
GadfIy
Faultless philosophy Janze. This is superb poetry.

Best wishes

Bill wine wine
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