Hey, Cowboy! Hold Your Horse!

Hey, Cowboy!
Hold your horse,
Slow down!
Whattya think,
You'r the only one in the town?

I know I'm a pretty gal
And you wanna take me out.
Whattya gonna to impress me with?
Old hat, lonely look
And the boots worn out?

Touch my heart, Cowboy,
Let it sing.
If you can't - get back in the line
Before I sting.

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Responce, By Redrose2009:


...
A Knightly Cowboy

In a sun-kissed town
By sundown
Lonely looks of a cowboy with exhausted boots and a tattered hat
Meet tamed looks of a pretty gal staring at his horse’s rat-a-tat-tat
She waves at the knightly cowboy, with a change of heart
Asks him if he’s the only one in the town to have a heart-to-heart
After greeting with a friendly “Hi”
He says, in this town, he’s the only regular guy
His golden touch can turn hearts into spring
He’s even able to make them beautifully sing.

...
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Responce By ustju

To Aprhodite

To a pure goddess

Did I just hear a voice? Or was it the whisper
Of a Goddess that walked this way past?
I stopped, I had a look and found to my joy
That Aphrodite herself set her eyes on me at last.

But why should she take her time to look
Upon a cowboy who thinks he’s the only one in town?
Surely he is a nobody compared to such beauty;
I wonder, but it only makes me frown.

This heavenly creature is the same one of my dreams;
The same one whose face makes my heart leap.
And now that she has taken human form
I shall no longer find relaxation in my sleep.

Come Aphrodite single me out
Let me shower you with eternal love
Let me fold my arms around you in perfect bliss
And clasped together let us fly beyond the clouds above.


from your Cowboy
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Posted: Sep 2009
About this poem:
I wrote it today, and responce was received shortly after, it made me laugh till tears!

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Comments (14)

fareaway
atta girl!!
sting it is..
applause hug teddybear
Sunnn
What a responce, RedRose!!! You made me laugh till tears!
PassionatePoet
Written like a true "Cowgirl". Well done and maybe a "lucky Cowboy" that males your heart sing. wine
Sunnn
Yeah, I'm a "Country Gal"!
Sunnn
ustju,
WOW
What a responce!!!
Please post your other poems!
ustju
How can I not respond to such beauty? It was as though your poem was written especially to and for me given that I am into Country music. Was it premonition?

Lawrence
raylight
I simply love it .. You sure have a way of using words!!!
andrew149
Well sunnn, looks like you're a star already, good read thankyou....andrew....xxx
Sunnn
peace peace peace

Thank you for all the great comments!

This poem was written for all the men from this website who approach my profile. It was written for you too heart wings
Sunnn
dan_barry64, Thank you very much for your amazing comment. Are you psychologist or a future teller? LOL

Thanks!heart wings heart wings heart wings
rambomalta
hahha, the horse escaped already. wanna catch it for me
Sunnn
rambomalta
No even horse?
You gotta work hard, Rambo, if you wanna impress me rolling on the floor laughing banana rolling on the floor laughing
sharkman
Yee haw!banana
Sunnn
sharkman

rolling on the floor laughing rolling on the floor laughing rolling on the floor laughing rolling on the floor laughing
We have texas town on this place I believe
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