mist falls softly on the leaves then gathers and runs to the tips and jumps like children on slides. smoke curls into shapes and disappears quickly like dreams. i breath deeply of you then let you go. wrong number on the phone. twice. something tells me i'm crazy inside. my mind i think. want you. want you now. love you. regardless of what anyone else says. so there.
Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoSep 22, 2011
Dear Irishmoon2011, thanks for producing a lovely write and sharing it,a noteworthy stand out to me was ''mist falls softly on the leaves then gathers and runs to the tips and jumps like children on slides. Smoke curls into shapes and disappears quickly like dreams.'' It gives the essence of a soothing effect,very nice and all the best to you.
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thanks for producing a lovely write and sharing it,a noteworthy stand out to me was ''mist falls softly on the leaves then gathers and runs to the tips and jumps like children on slides. Smoke curls into shapes and disappears quickly like dreams.'' It gives the essence of a soothing effect,very nice and all the best to you.
Yours Truly
PN1