Natures Painting

The wall crumbled and old, the bricks falling to dust,
The bones of the man as if sitting waiting against the wall,
His bones dry and beginning to crumble, the hard hat at an angle where it had fallen, the shirt rotting and faded in the sun.

Through the opening that used to be a window, the bright
green creeper had begun, it had crept along the wall like a snake, and seemed to find the opening in the shirt, climbed through the ribs of the man and almost like it knew, had come to an end just before his throat.

The bright red splash of colour and life of the rose, as if nature had placed a flower where his heart had been, shimmered in the sun.
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Posted: Jun 2013
About this poem:
How nature seems to make all things beautiful in time if we give her a chance:-)

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Spartacus2012
Good slice of life write my lady...Kenbouquet
ladyjewel
teddybear thank you Kenhug
Fellsman
Hi LJ

This is so surreal - the imagery you conjure up is on the one hand unsettling, yet on the other hand, not without the comfort of nature's unfailing cycle of renewal.

If I may say so, the thinking man's (or woman's) poetry.

Regards

Bill gift teddybear
ladyjewel
Thank you Billhug ,
I get some strange thoughts sometimes, its kind of nice to put them somewhere teddybear
Macduff5
Hi Jewel,

I can imagine this one. An ancient corpse subsumed by nature. Part of that amazing process that once was humanity and has now become recognized as simply a part of a larger process and honoured for an existence that was by that splash of colour of a rose. Very poignant. wine bouquet
ladyjewel
hug thank you very much, i love comments from both of you great guys hug hug
weemick1960
I'm with everyone else in what they say. I really enjoyed the read. A different arrow to your bow again. So I have fallen head over heels for a most talented young Lady. Believe me my Soul, that suits me down to the ground. Keep up the good work.
Catch you later.
Your Michael.
Odette67
A superb write Ladyjewel. hug purple heart
Pipin
Very nice writing, enjoyed reading it, thank you very much for sharing hug
ladyjewel
Pippin, thank youhug
Odette, teddybear am glad you are backhug

My love, thank you, kiss heart wings
Arteee
WOW!!.... Great stuff! I love this.. You are such an amazing writer..
I love your poems ladyjewel!!...
daisy angel2 wine thumbs up angel bouquet
mrwatson
i write alot of poetry and always rhyme its just how i am. but wow amazing vivid image the metaphor u used as a man was magical serious serious talent. check out my poems an tell me what u think id appreciate some feedback from a pro like yourself
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