Your rebirth is immersed in a pain so loud no one but you and I can hear your screams Everyone else numbly walks by you, living their lives never asking that one question nagging them Half the time, your blind agony keeps me from getting too close. Maybe I'm the problem At other times, I am the only one who truly understands who you are metamorphasizing into Maybe I'm part of your re-creation
Holding onto what little air is left for your tears to dry We set fire to all of that pain That rage Letting it all melt away to nothing like prophetic candles
The peeling away of old flesh taking with it that lump of something undefined that stays Leaving nothing but the self inflicted scars to remind you, that yes,
Rebirth hurts
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Posted: Nov 2011
About this poem:
written just now 11-8-11 for Jessie, my bf who is going through a lot right now, finally letting go of the pain and anger of his youth and living, once again
kdtruckerdrive 48 states, California USANov 8, 2011
Enjoyed.....
Macduff5Newcastle, New South Wales AustraliaNov 8, 2011
Hi Soquiliquay,
So eloquently expressed
Maxeen_1YORK, North Yorkshire, England UKNov 8, 2011
Rebirth Hurts by: soquiliquay sensitive sincere write thankyou for sharing. "Holding onto what little air is left for your tears to dry We set fire to all of that pain That rage
Comments (3)
So eloquently expressed
sensitive sincere write thankyou for sharing.
"Holding onto what little air is left
for your tears to dry
We set fire to all of that pain
That rage