please let me be....

seven months had past ...
direction to where we are going is still unknown...
in times of loneliness i do think "will it last?"...
up to when will i wait to call u my own...?


u are there , i am here...
will it be for real...?
doubts in my heart sometimes get me to fear...
should i stay ?, should i leave? oh how should i feel?


i pray and pray and pray for the sign,
if u are goin to be mine,..
all i know is it hurts me more than u do...
when i thought of me leaving u...



but are we going to be like this forever?
i mean our minds connect but the flesh never?
will the beat of ur heart will i hear ever?
and feel the warmth of ur lips so tender...



we are two lost souls ...
we had found each other...
ur pain, is my pain...
but where will i ever be?
where will u ever be?




just here,,,,just here ...
no chance...
not ever...
and

now will u let me
shed tear ?
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Jan 2012
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i wrote this on blog section....i forgot the poem section here and i am kinda low when i wrote this.....

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cafetwo2010
Very, very nice dear. Reads like a poetic loveletter.wine teddybear teddybear
nice_and_easy
thx...its a thot i cant ...i meant i would not like him to hear...coz i cant hurt him....moping
gnj4u
Hi, nice_and_easy,
Love at a distance may be nice but, as your poem so poignantly paints, especially in stanza 4, it certainly isn't easy. It's important to know the direction even when the final destination is not yet in sight. This poem has me rooting for a face-to-face connection!
nice_and_easy
hi gnj4u....yes its about the distance but i can handle it well if i can only see things clearly ahead....no we dont see each other often even on cam.....moping
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