Phrase of haze

In the end it receeded, the feelings he needed
it all stayed inside, bitter but warm
The creature resided in a dead girl delightful,
of the uprising and changing of minds

Converging on zero her light off the mirror
refracted with caution and bowed through the rain.
A world of unkowing, lifeless and growing,
a spawn so abnormal it holds grudges aside.

Re-forming past glory, building authority
conception has only begun...
Anatomys deformed, contorted by the will
of one which feeds on the need to belong.
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Posted: Apr 2012
About this poem:
this is the first 'poem' that i wrote. Its not really about any one thing in particular. It expresses the fog which hangs around in my head when things get hard and I struggle to make a decision.

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Comments (2)

mcradloff
I thought it was about some alien, then I thought it was about a baby being formed, very clever as I've read it several times and come to different conclusions.applause bunny
Odette67
A world of unkowing, lifeless and growing,
a spawn so abnormal it holds grudges aside.

You described this poem well... I liked very much. purple heart
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