In the end it receeded, the feelings he needed it all stayed inside, bitter but warm The creature resided in a dead girl delightful, of the uprising and changing of minds
Converging on zero her light off the mirror refracted with caution and bowed through the rain. A world of unkowing, lifeless and growing, a spawn so abnormal it holds grudges aside.
Re-forming past glory, building authority conception has only begun... Anatomys deformed, contorted by the will of one which feeds on the need to belong.
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Posted: Apr 2012
About this poem:
this is the first 'poem' that i wrote. Its not really about any one thing in particular. It expresses the fog which hangs around in my head when things get hard and I struggle to make a decision.
I thought it was about some alien, then I thought it was about a baby being formed, very clever as I've read it several times and come to different conclusions.
Odette67Penrith, Cumbria, England UKApr 4, 2012
A world of unkowing, lifeless and growing, a spawn so abnormal it holds grudges aside. You described this poem well... I liked very much.
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a spawn so abnormal it holds grudges aside.
You described this poem well... I liked very much.