can wait for patience

Patience is a virtue for the young and the old
but some of us are just to bold
the young want it all tomorrow
the old want it all yesterday
thats why i say that this is true
because whats true is true
simply because its true,
and i just cant wait to say that i love you.
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Posted: Apr 2012
About this poem:
i wrote this poem in a bar in manhatten thinking about a beautiful girl i met in boston, the bar lady told me young people have no patieance and old people have too much when i kept shouting orders at her,, we were kidding around with each other,i decided to go back to boston to this girl and tell her how i feel, i was leaving the country in one week,,i had to see her ,,i had a feeling she felt the same i could tell by the way she looked at me,,so i travelled on a bus for 11hours,,i told her how i felt and we kissed and went out to her balcony then i showed her my poem,,,i would like to say we lived happily ever after but that wouldt be true ,,,but that moment will be with me forever

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Odette67
Patience is a virtue for the young and the old
but some of us are just to bold
the young want it all tomorrow
the old want it all yesterday
thats why i say that this is true
because whats true is true
simply because its true,
and i just cant wait to say that i love you.

Neat poem... Lovely story...One thing no one can take away are ones memories.

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