My promise

So I'm sad,
hurt you could say,
words flowing through my mind,
rushing, overlapping,
yet I just cant form the first sentence
cant even say the first word
to express how I feel
trying to write a poem that's happy
one that shows the fun side of me
a poem that doesn't fill my eyes with tears
but here I am crying out
just as I put the pen on the paper
why is it that sadness is my main inspiration to write?
each time a poem comes to mind
my heart is always breaking
I'm trying to give you readers a smile upon your face
a chuckle or even a laugh
when next you read another poem of mine
as easy as it sounds, it's almost impossible
for each thought comes with tears
each tear comes with a scream
So my CS readers, this is a promise I shall keep
a smile, a chuckle or even a laugh
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Apr 2012
About this poem:
just feeling really depressed right now

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Comments (7)

lucy1777
Hugs shaniaiteddybear Keep writing those feelings and get them out,It always seems to help me.comfort
Shaniai
thanks Lucy, it always helps
Poetnumber1
Sorry to hear that dear poet,may God give you the joy you so warmly need this time,thanks for sharing this piecebouquet teddybear teddybear
Shaniai
thanks poet1 for your kind words, needed it
windyweatherly
Way to go shaniai. o
i love the promise in the end
thanks for sharing .
elo69
you have a beautiful smile,in your picture
would be a shame if you were not wearing it on your face right now
...elo..wave
Shaniai
Thanks windy for your wonderful comments, trying to keep that smile on my face elo, thanks.
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