I pulled up a chair next to her at the dinner table while watching her pour food from a jar without a label She neither look nor shift when I sat in my chair At the other side of the room on the wall she kept a steady stare not a sound escaped her lips , no sound at all her face was dry cold as if it were made of ice something is wrong, this cant be nice. I'm afraid just to sit here and watch her eat my heart was beating fast,matching the nervous shakes of my feet Then she looked at me with a face that was determined a face that was free with a face in pain, a pain caused by me then out popped a paper, a paper from her pocket she stretched over and slipped it in my jacket she then got up to walk but down she went with a a fall I look not at her but to the lid of the jar reading the word in fine print that marked death I ran to her and heard the words she whispered with her last breath she whispered to me "I love you" she said she love me? that cant be true I'm still bond to her for she signed none of the papers then I called and cancelled the movers I began to read the paper, the paper in my jacket It said "you have lost the love, you have lost the love for me. before you leave me, I rather die, so death it shall be." with tears rolling from my eyes while eating the last in the jar, I repeat the words "death it shall be." death is the only thing that can stop the guilt in me.
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Posted: Apr 2012
About this poem:
another poem written by my brother, he gave it to me to share here with my CS family, hope you guys like it.
Shaniai, this is just a great story wrapped up in a great poem. Your brother has a wonderful imagination and both the poems you write yourself and your brother's are very enjoyable to read. I'm so glad you are here and sharing your work.
cafetwo2010Harford county, Maryland USAApr 28, 2012
Quite a powerful poem I think..Interesting phrases. Definitely keep writing. Seems to be a talent here for many styles of writing.
ShaniaiOPHartford, Connecticut USAApr 28, 2012
thank you all very much for all your wonderful comments.
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